What would I do without you… (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

a funny write Ed
most enjoyable
see you're addicted to them there key boards
Peace brother

William

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

well, guess that's what you'd call a very close and intimate relationship if you can honestly serenade your love with Air On Your G-String. Does she reciprocate with a download of crap right back atya?! :)) xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

I didn't laugh because I was so dissapointed, thinking what a beautiful write this was...until you ended it like that...ET

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Now I know what happened to the sides on your motor,
Home toooo much beans, is Rufuz OK :)
From one old fart to another
Have a great day
Canadian Buzzard

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Hi Ed, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! You have to know by now my sense of humor, and I say, when there is nothing left to be said, when there is too much said, and when there is not enough said, or just for the sake of saying anything or nothing at all, that a fart sums up everything! But don't take it from me... take it on a whiff... here's to laptops!!!! :)

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Where do you take those farts??!! My dogs just got an e-mail from Rufuz complaining that you don't take them out often enough to suit him - maybe you should take both your laptop and your farts for a nice long walk on the beach today and give Rufie a breather!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Stop eating chilli you inconsiderate old fart! the smell is coming here and ain't no vitamins in it! ! !

EDvard(k), the delicate nose Ole Brother

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Great poem.That last line was hilarious.I enjoy reading it,take care

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

Ain't that cute. :) And y'all look so happy together - who am I to break up a perfectly normal relationship?!? I'm in love with my desktop!! Well done, Ed.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

very funny and cleverly done!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

You are sick, you know that?? LOL You are crazier than a June bedbug! LOL Too funny; well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

...and they say I am the romantic...when you can combine love and farting in one poem...well done.

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