Reclaiming My Birth (poem) by Rose L on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Outstanding !!!!!!!!!!! I really like this.
More please.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Dear Rose. This is a beautiful creation and I thank you for sharing it with us. My love and peace to you always. Regis

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

My childhood has returned to me so many times that I wonder if I ever lost it.

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Vivid outcry for a life close to its essence... Thank you for your passion and vision. Franz

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Inspiration from what must have been an amazing connection with the sand and sea. Good comparisons and metaphors Rose, VERY good comparisons.

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Rose,
First I know your love of the ocean and also I know this was something here you had given much serious thought and I am glad you took your first step and from your write here it was everything you had hoped for as an experience of a rebirth. Excellent words to describe how you felt on this first step here.
Hope the rebirth continues to grow within you.
Tommy
~~~&&&***

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Beautiful write Rose!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Libertad! Ah... Si! "Reclaiming My Birth" left me feeling like there's much yet unexplored inside me -- what a challenge to give into it. Thanks Rose. *smile*

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Wow!
This is an experience extraordinaire, expressed in
the same manner.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Yes it is indeed one of life's most liberating pastimes, to lie in the sun, as you were the day you were born, but here with plenty of sunscreen on.
Excellente, and most invigorating to the mind.
Yes Andy it does LOL.

Love
~Contesse~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Profound and beautiful write!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Truly beautiful and exquisite Rose
Another gem from your quill my friend ....

Love
Peter

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

BEAUTIFUl just so Beautiful Rose!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

This is superb Rose, you captured the imagery wonderfully!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Rose, great el-natural poem...I can definately relate to this one, although I think I would look quite obvious strutting my naked bod along the beaches in Hong Kong...I love the verse where you write

In the sand that peppers my skin and under girds me
I am reminded that no one-grain of sand makes a beach

Enjoyed...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

know where you're coming from ... outstanding imagery!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Rose, this is an exceptionally well-crafted composition, which blends all the NATURAL beauty of Mother Nature and her offspring�s. Just make sure you use plenty of sun tan lotion, better yet, make sure you take someone special with you, and allow them to apply a generous amount all over� lol. It really will help keep you from frying like a lobster my friend� lol. And besides it feels so refreshing too! Thanks for sharing the vivid imagery� lol. Okay, I�ll stop. I see you blushing� lol. Outstanding work, Poet! Or would that be out side standing� lol! Peace Rose!

P.S. If you do take any pictures of the seagulls, please keep them for prosperity�lol.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Sounds Very Liberating!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

To each their own. Be free as you can be..
excellent write.....

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Actually I disagree with Andy, hope you don't post the snaps as most I have seen on those beaches are as old as the hills, not to say that I am talking about you, but, well, uh, er, let me just end this review here before I lost what few teeth I have left...Peace thru Nudity, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Hope you post the snaps.

Does sand ("Andy no")

So feeling liberated and carefree, yes passion on a birthday suit beach would be of concern...

fun fun fun, in the sun sun sun..