This is a nostalgic work written in a traditional bardic form that originated in Wales.
Dusk dims the light and veils this farm’s
Forgotten face and homespun charms.
Behind rusted gates
A crow cultivates
Earth that waits
For tanned arms
To harness moody mules to plow.
No wrinkled face with sweaty brow
Lifts toward welcome rain.
Equine weather vane
Tosses mane,
Jumps a bough,
And pivots toward the Pleiades
Before an unseen hand can seize
The reins or halter.
Tarnished hooves falter:
Tracks alter
With the breeze.
Then moonlight cools July’s hard heat
And silvers errant stalks of wheat.
With darkness erased
My memories taste
Of dreams chased—
Bittersweet.
~The Old Homestead, Jeffersonville, Georgia, December 2016
First published in Lyric, vol. 97, no. 3 (Summer 2017): 105. Print.
Notes:
Like many aged wooden farmhouses in the vicinity of Middle Georgia, the Old Homestead was abandoned and left to deteriorate. The family moved into a brick house on the property.
A real testimony to rural life. Makes me remember the video that my brother made taking our mother to the abandoned farmhouse she grew up in. She even found mementos still in the house from her childhood. Reminds me of my youth visiting relatives' farms and sometimes, exploring abandoned farmhouses.
Genteel and skillfully done. A fine discipline. 2 lines 8 syllables, 2 lines 5 syllables, 2 lines 3 syllables. Not usually a fan of rhyming but I like this format a lot. I'm going to try it. Thanks for sharing. Peace... r
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