Tall, dark, wise
They are all words used to describe
If they don't fit I cannot say why
As shadowed figures of light pass by
If nothing comes of this please say
Then nothing of it shall come this way
And so you see I cannot tell
For what you do you do so well
In the end we all shall see
What is to come is meant to be.
Poetry drips like from a faucet. We can not control where the water spatters. Only that we are the faucet.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
It is kinda sad, when someone feels bad about rhyme.
Sensible or nonsensical. It's like they've lost that part of their being that likes fun, spontaneity, and take themselves far too seriously..
Ning nang nong
what a noisey place to belong... SM
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
Nicely said and done...who has to have a reason???
Susan, that was exactly the point. Thanks for your "compliment" :)
Andy, I am a fun person! I just like stiring the pot a bit!
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This in no way should be taken as a put down to those who
can create beautifully rhythmiclly rhyming poetry.
It’s just that I can’t stand a rhyme for the sake of itself. ===================================
I'm so confused!! This is a perfect example of a rhyming verse that simply does not flow or make sense! (I cannot believe that this review is a compliment! It sure doesn't sound like it! (: )
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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Sensible or nonsensical. It's like they've lost that part of their being that likes fun, spontaneity, and take themselves far too seriously..
Ning nang nong
what a noisey place to belong... SM
Andy, I am a fun person! I just like stiring the pot a bit!
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This in no way should be taken as a put down to those who
can create beautifully rhythmiclly rhyming poetry.
It’s just that I can’t stand a rhyme for the sake of itself.
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Susan