Be frank and do the poet a favour in the long run...
Villanelle : Paint no colours on plain words lest the poet stop(s) writing
Paint no colours on plain words lest the poet stop(s) writing
Out of fear for what he writes makes no sense to the wise reader
Can words of encouragement be best meted out unreviling
Tell no white lies under the guise of covert praise inviting
Better still no swill wallows under poems by suitor
Paint no colours on plain words lest the poet stop(s) writing
If you tell a poet what's wrong with his poetising
You'll do him a greater service than any imposter
Can words of encouragement be best meted out unreviling
The kind of heedless praise gushing will longrun prove crippling
That which soothes bolsters the ego comes from flatterer
Paint no coiours on plain words lest the poet stop(s) writing
Watch what the flatterer says it's self-compromising
See how he lures you back to his page as cunning visitor
Can words of encouragement be best meted out unreviling
If you learn to write with conviction not by ruse conniving
Two hoots will you give to thumbs up or down on what you proffer
Paint no colours on plain words lest the poet stop(s) writing
Can words of encouragement be best meted out unreviling
Wise words. I learned a long time ago that flattery will get you nowhere. Candy and flowers doesn't get the girl. So give it a whirl… All you schmoozers out there who can't seem to comment on a poem's worth without gushing and hoping that the poet you comment on will come back and do a tit for a tat.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
(Self-published. Please contact author directly to order.)
Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Ron