The Sumerians (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

This was an exciting write,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2006

groovey! looks like you've gone on a spiel of exploration and recitation of different cultures - marvelous!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Peter, the PhD in humanity, spirituality and poetic excellency ...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

What a great write to usher in National (or is it International now?) Poetry Month! What a great series of spiritual meditations you have given us in your most recently posted works. Thank you for diving so deeply into the miraculous depths of your own spirit and bringing back so much gold for all to enjoy.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Your poems are a lesson in verse; thank you for educating us with your words! BRAVO, Peter; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Most engaging and educational, Peter. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Peter,

I continue to learn by reading this series on beliefs; well researched and written! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

((((( WOW)))) incredibly fascinating, Peter. I never knew very much about that particular society. Many of them , well all of them had influeneces from above. My two favorit societys were Atlantis and Egypt.Back then, there was so much incredible knowledge way beyond our time now. Atlantis really amazed me with their ability to produce energy way beyond our time now on earth. Egypt amazed me at everything, including the development of longitude and latitude.It amazed me their sense of knowing the after life. The Sumerians I feel were just as powerfuly advanced in many areas.Your definetly hearing spirit give you this knowledge because I do feel you have much high knowledge.In the book of Deuteronomy where it talks about the temple,( I am talking about major temple back then ) it's uses, where they kept the Ark of the Covenant,the Brazen Laver, the table of shoebread, the lamps, the measurements, the inner and outter court of the temple. Amazing to the core.Anyways, your words are I know are from up above. For some reason I am shown we are to know the knowledge now. I feel it has something to do with the times we are in. I feel you are trying by the Holy Spirit to bring others into a higher understanding of what knowlege we may know for a divine reason. Excellent topic to write about. Fascinating to the core. Thanks for the masterpiece, Peter...And yes, prayers are so needed upon this earth at this challenging time. Thank you for yours.

((((( Hugs And Love, JoAnne ))))

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

We are seminally(sp?)Sumerian. Great civilizations arose to evolve mankind. The incense of history has always stirred my senses. I do sincerely appreciate you, Peter. You raise us above the pathos of our little worlds. Superbly written and presented! Ty...

Lin

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Yeah, but what did they have against ostriches, lions and snakes, then??!! :)) Blimey, wish I had a brain sometimes. I'd be able to take some of this "worth-knowin" stuff in... Doubt if I were to get a spray-can out and paint "Kate woz ere" on my study walls, anyone would be much interested in 1000 years' time... But in the circle of life, guess I am linked by being a Con-Sumerian... Roots and civilisation, gotta love it and especially impressed by those who furnish dullards like me with the vital facts. When my head clears I will be back to REALLY learn a thing or two... Why don't you and The Sage to a collab?? THAT would be coooool..... K xx

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Very well done and researched. I admire your quest to educate us nd I appreciate your work. The poetry is insightful along with the graphics. I'm a history buff and I'm learning a lot from your recent rites. Well done,Peter.
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

And another powerful write!!

Thank you...quiet educational to me!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

I love too delve into the ancient civilizations. You know, like the America that used to be, without all the insanity? This was well done and informative. Good job.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

A powerful offering Peter! This is fascinating and highly informative. Makes one want to read more about it.
Fine work once again! Thanks for sharing!

Eileen

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

I have a fascination for history too and find poetry or articles like this very interesting and enlightening.