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The Spartans
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" In Greece, at the pass of Thermopylae, there stands a pillar inscribed with ancient Greek characters commemorating the bravery of a small band of men. This almost forgotten act of courage echoes down through the centuries, but how many know that it directly affects our civilization today? But, it is true . Without the steadfast determination of King Leonidas and his three hundred Spartan warriors , Western Civilization itself would likely be very different if it existed at all.

After repelling numerous Persian attacks, the Persian King Xerxes sent a herald to meet with Leonidas in no-man's land.
The Persian emissary spoke first, saying "Put down your weapons and surrender."
Leonidas replied, "Molon Labe. Come and take them."
Persian said, "If we come, our arrows will blot out the sun."
Leonidas replied, "Good. Then we will fight in the shade."

Leonidas and his three hundred Spartan heroes were slaughtered by ten thousand Persians at the pass , but their courageous last stand, held up the Persian invasion sufficiently for the Greek Army to regroup and repel their blood thirsty invaders .
Incidentally, Leonidas famous saying, MOLON LABE, come and take them, has come down to us through the mists of time to inspire patriots in all ages. At the battle of Bunker Hill the British told our revolutionary forefathers to lay down your arms and surrender. Their response: Come and take them! It was also a phrase used in the fight for Texas independence when the Mexicans tried to get the Texicans to surrender their cannon. Their response: Come and take it! "

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You Leonidas, King of Sparta

commanded the greatest rearguard action of all time

your valiant three hundred Spartan warriors

kept ten thousand invading Persians at bay

in the narrow pass of Thermopylae

and saved Athens and Greece from the invading hordes

as long as tales and legends are told in human history

we will long remember your heroic efforts

brave defenders of the homeland

against the marauding dervishes of King Xerxes

we are indebted to your valour and sacrifice

as you and your band of brothers layed down their lives

for the sake of freedom and humanity

courage unsurpassed, and bravery unrivalled

you never flinched in the face of the enemy

and all civilisation owes your men a debt of honour

your wives wept, and your children were left fatherless

and the wild wind blows, down that lonely pass

where the red speckled poppies, grow on the barren soil

but your memory burns in our grateful hearts

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
 

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 Reviews of "The Spartans "
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Oh, this was absolutely fantastic! Loved it from beginning to the end, great work!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
(((BRAVO))) I like tales of heroes, whether ancient or modern. Spose the modern-day equivalent would be crack-force SAS or SWAT or whatever. Actually, small bands who alter the face of time and history must abound in their ways, but we never get to hear about these "12 good men and true". So glad we have information disseminators in this Den who do so much to make us aware of that of which tis sinful to be iggorant. Our debts of gratitude abound.... BTW, nice legs!! :))

Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Peter,

You bring history alive in vivid prose and poetry; well done, Teacher!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
your valiant three hundred Spartan warriors
kept ten thousand invading Persians at bay

Epic tales such as this will never die, as long as there are poets such as yourself to tell them, Peter.


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Bet that guy was cold, he isn't wearing very much...ed

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Oh! I remember Thermopylae well Peter...well the film anyway lol. They were betrayed by a traitor and finally overwhelmed but they did prevent Xrexes from invading, a fitting tribute to a top job.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Another great tribute Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Truly you cast a tribute of these Valiant Warriors this is masterful Peter. :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Remember Thermopylae . . .Remember the Alamo. Valiant warriors all. Enjoy this one very much.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Peter,another impressive telling of history that many have forgotten or never really knew. You make it a joy to read!
Thank you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
again i leave your den informed and enlivened by your verse ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Yes!! History is gone but never forgotten and some of us didn't listen to our techer but are alert today to your marvelous history poems. I love it Peter.
Susan

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Superb, Peter...thank you for this...for keeping history alive.

Gina

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2006
((((Peter ))) incredible, beautiful, glorious imagery you write, friend. I wish I had that kind of muse, dear one..You invite the reader in and they just stay in that realm...Wowwwww..I felt I was there, feeling, expressing, dieing... It is painted so beautifuly in words, such winds of colors of imagery..Outstanding write...


((((( Love And Hope, JoAnne ))))))

Reviewed on April 17, 2006
Great historical piece, Peter; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D


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