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Cave of Aspirations
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" You can... if you think you can....and always think you can..".

 

Norman Vincent Peale

..................................................

 

In the Cave of Aspirations

everything is possible

to those who know

how to differentiate

between fact and fantasy

and align with the Universe

Life is but a dream

and within our Imagination

lies a vast reservoir of riches

and you must harness that Power

deep in your Colossal Mind

that takes you there

stalactites of possibilities

and stalagmites of opportunities

within our very reach and grasp

the metaphorical bats of intent

fly from the Dark to the Light

the Law of Attraction

brings the Desires of our Heart

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
 

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 Reviews of "Cave of Aspirations"
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on October 20, 2006
I'm catching up and came across this wonderful write Peter. It's brimming with inspiration and positivity...and I love the development of the theme and metaphor...What a great way to motivate my day!
Smiling and refreshed,
Taylor~

Reviewed on October 4, 2006
Both Wisdom and Inspiration in this, Peter. I think we all should shelter in this cave.

Micke

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
Well if you go into a glow worm cave, and not come out inspired, then somethings wrong LOL, excellente Peter.
Ty, I love stalagmites and stalagtites too.
Ch'erie

Reviewed on October 2, 2006
Very true, Peter! A thought-provoking write!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Motivational thoughts, Peter. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
We are but charmed and fuzzy quarks chasing each other around, yet our hard edges from long survived DNA, do not easily peel off. I, for one, find it hard, as you so aptly pointed out, find it hard to leap from fact to fantasy.

Ron

Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Great depth of thought penned within.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Peter, a beautiful and inspiring write! I want to go to the Cave of Aspirations!!! And a fascinating graphic to go with your wonderful write. All in all, a pleasure to come upon this foggy Sunday morning.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Indded you have exporessed the law ..Like attracts like..period!

Profound write..

Vesna:)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Cosmic and geologically inspiring Peter
Can I stand on one of those stalagmites and reach my dreams......
What a visual!
LOL
you inspire, that sfor sure
pax A

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
The power of positive thinking can remove all of the obstacles from our pathway throughout our lifetime. Nice, Peter!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Thank you for this timely dose of inspiration and motivation. Belief in Self and positive possibilities are easily shaken in these challenging times but poems such as these help restore both faith and courage.
Aberjhani

Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A wonderous Cave indeed, Peter, beautifully inspiring verse you pen! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A very rich and deep write. Differentiate between fact and fantasy ... excellent.
Many hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Your analogies are always fresh and brilliant.. this is no exception!
Loved the read and the message...
Myrna

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
You eloquently make such stunning statements that really stir my soul. Thank you Peter for all you share. I have kept this. Love Panda :)

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
I think I can I think I can I think I will. . . thanks for the Bro. Peter~
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
You make two important points, one is that we must have aspirations, the other is that we should be wise and choose those which are attainable. A fine poem. Victor

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
superb imagery and metaphor ... yes, there are those who can decipher reality from fantasy and "harness that Power deep in your Colossal Mind" ... profound philosophic truisms flow from this poem, Peter ...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
Peter,
This is target to a study of positive affirmations for bringing self in line in all areas been trying...... Thank you for this inspiring piece. God teaches us to speak those things and we attract them too..

Love, Peace
Joselyn

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
So Peter, you've been reading Michael Losier! LOL

This is a finely-tuned, and powerfully telling write, descriptive of your own masterful skills, Sir Patton.

Great graphic and quote, too.
Love&Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
Your always on point Peter, and your wisdom is a beacon of light to all who seek a balanced path to trod!You are inspired and bless others because of it! Thank you!

Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
Just as a moth is attracted to flames...such is one heart to another. The depth of the heart is as dark as a cave but full of magic with a light that burns immortal. The crystals of energies and mysterious strengths still be explored , fills the pill in your libes. I've always been amazed at the power of crystals/stalactites .
Try this...find two crytals...go into a completely dark room ,then hit one crystal against the other. They will spark and light up with a blue glow and stay lit for quite a while.
Let me know how you feel afterwards.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
This is a great poem, I love how you've used cave terminology within the writing...wonderful. This takes me back to my youth, we explored caves that were located in the mountains behind our farm at least once a week, we went believing we would find treasure, and indeed we did, many Native American artifacts that are still treasures today. Very inspiring write...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
This is a poem with a big loud clear warm voice - liked this flowing, uplifting poem all the way up to the light - lovely! Nicky x

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
this poem is quite meaningful to me as I have been trying to significantly change my thought patterns. This is a wonderful poem, Peter. As with all of your poetry, it reads smoothly and that is always a joy to experience!

Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
Wonderful serene uplifting inspiring and philsophical write Peter!!

Nice read before lalla-time!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 29, 2006
What an awesome write and a pleasure to read.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
Sir Peter the philsophical ...

Such calmness permeates your writes. And dealing with such a heady topic - you don't walk through the fires you levitate through them will the skill of a fine sculpture of thought.

"to those who know
how to differentiate
between fact and fantasy" is, in my mind, the strong thread that ties together this write.

Since imaginative power is a form of fantasy, which can lead one easily down the wrong paths, because of its propensity to be at times so abstract, I feel that you are exhorting the reader to know the difference between what is eternal and what is transitory as we follow the road of our own aspirations.

I feel as if I have ingested dew laden gems of heavenly wisdom in this construct.

I salute you fellow traveler ...

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 29, 2006
In the cave of your thoughts you have produced a memorable poem.


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