Velvet Nights of Us (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 9, 2012

Poetic your velvet words. Lilt of God's music.
Lovely canvas Peter
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

How incredibly lovely Peter. "We will paint the perfect picture on the open canvas of our lives". A beautifully romantic piece. Thank you for sharing it. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

A beautiful invitation to let go, drift with the moment without worry.
Love and Peace, B&R

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Love the photo.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Romance Plus...
Definately a double take here :)
Loved it
Ch'erie

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 15, 2006

eloquent, charming and soulful pen ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 15, 2006

Perfect, perfect, perfect comes to mind.

Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 15, 2006

Peter you outdid yourself with this gem!You did paint the perfect picture. It is so beautifully described with the colors of divinity,I want it!!!;-)Thanks for sharing your poetic genuis Peter!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2006

Blimey the scotish charm, and winning at football, unlike a team further south. Pure masterclass romance..

And you dad was on Churchills ship, blimey....

Reviewed by Aria Aven (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2006

I can't imagine any woman not wanting these words said to her, simply lovely.

Aria

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 14, 2006

This is the finest of romance; I let go a sweet sigh as I read the final line. Very nice poem, Peter, and one for my library.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 14, 2006

Gossamer and breathtaking in its precision and scope, Peter. You merge the heavens and the heart seamlessly on this poetic canvas and fully paint every shade and nouance of the character of true love. Enduring and timeless. Just beautiful! TY K xx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 14, 2006

Peter,

You have penned a beauty here; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and mcuh love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Brautiful haven in this canyon of bliss. You have that tender touch so important to harmony in a love affair.

My best to you Peter.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Magnifique!

Peter,

Your poetry is so brilliant, it is always equivalent to a set of floodlights, pouring out their light, at the feet of the subject[s].

Love&Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Angel God is Love

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Beautiful and touching thanks
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

"Open Canvas of our life"
Beautriful poetry and the imagery twined in verses made for a loving ode..... When it is right it is right and velvet right from heaven...

Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

An engaging invitation painted on a backdrop of superb imagery. Thank you for sharing this offering, Peter. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

this is glorious!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

This verse certainly paints the perfect picture with Kodak snapshot like quality in each line. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Most beautiful picture you painted today Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Your closing lines 'we will paint the perfect picture
on the open canvas of our lives' is so classic and so lovely!
Such spectacular imagery in this piece...

Myrna

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Your words paint a romantic journey with your loved one.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Sir Peter ...

Who could ever resist an invitation as such. And that watershed ... most assuredly a place that Michele and I would love to explore. It reminds me of terrain in north Prescott Arizona.

Your use of simile in the lines:

"steals across your gentle heart
like the blue heron on its flight"

Was resplendent. So few words - such a magnificent canvas you paint of a loving heart at peace with his life. This was exceptional!

Thankyou ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

The imagery is a perfect painting. You took me with you on a wonderful voyage. Victor

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

This resonates as a beautiful spiritual chord...that will strike many hearts I am sure. What a fabulous picture you always paint for the reader dear Peter. Love Panda :)

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

... and so you did, Peter. This is no less radiant than artistic oils on a painter's canvas of God's own rainbow, a painting so vivid and beautiful, and with mere words. Lovely.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Ever the master of the blend of nature's beauty and fascination, the hum of God in your heart, and the wondrous warmth and beauty of romance. may these always be your journeys and your joy.
Love and admiration,
Taylor

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Wow!!!!! Peter, this is so romantic and so promising!!!!! Wonderful write indeed!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Linda Dousay

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Wow! That is beautiful, Peter...and the picture is breathtaking!

Linda