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First Date
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Ahhhh do you remember that first ever date when you were so nervous you thought it was torture...at first.


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My palms sweat and the wool itches my legs


My mind is in turmoil what shall I say


She answers the door and I stand mouth agape


How did I ever end up here today


 


She’s an angel in blue, ribbons in hair


White shoes on her feet her shoulders are bare


I pass her the corsage, my mother picked out


Her father is smiling as hello I almost shout


 


On our way to the dance we sit in the back


Parents eyes in a mirror watching me crack


I open the door and she holds out her hand


God help me I’m sweaty will she understand


 


Walk through the door to the dimly lit gym


A slow song is playing I ask on a whim


Would you like to dance, she nods smiling okay


I feel her against me I’m in heaven today


 


Stirrings and cravings I never felt before


As we sway to the music I know I want more


Too soon at her doorstep I mumble goodnight


Her lips  brush my cheek, nothing could be so right.


 


 


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 Reviews of "First Date"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 10, 2006
Wonderful write Feix!!]

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reviewed on July 9, 2006
Felix,

You captured the essence of the moment beautifully. One of your best!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on July 9, 2006
Great trip down memory lane...

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2006
First Date, First Kiss, First Encounter...love it, Fee.

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2006
awesome ! reminds me of my bro and sisters sixties parties at the house! lol

be blessed
criso

Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Oh Felix, you send us back down memory lane... sweet and innocent, a wonderful write,
Love B&R

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Wonderful Felix!
Perfectly described!!
A unique yet universal experience...Embracing the memory of many...
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Beautiful poetry and memories this is so very well done Felix.... Thank you
Josie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Had to think back on that one...thanks for the memory.

Good one...



Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
delightful memory poem, Felix ...

my first date was my last ...

Reviewed on July 8, 2006
So very sweet! You have described that first date so well. Good job on this one!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
so very, very sweet, Felix!!

Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Brings back wonderful memories.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Felix...

You are right on the button with this one...

The first time is always the worse for any situation...and experience is the father of wisdom..

Wonderful and memory filled write..

Peter

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Awww...I don't think I was ever nervous when I was young. I guess I had been so social all my life that this precious moment eluded me. I did take a couple of sweaty hands, though, and I rather thought it was sweet that he was so nervous. I made it easy on them though, I was so outgoing and bubbly that he was feeling fine in no time, laughing and having a good time. I didn't have an evil bone in my body back then. HehHeh...good thing he didn't meet me today!! LOL
Nostalgic and sweet, Felix.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 8, 2006
Fee....Is that you with hair?
The moments when we're first held close...when all the fears stretch the moments and when we smell another held so close we fear we may get pregnant...these are the best memories as our passions become a part of another for the first time. You have it all right here. This is wonderful.
Susan


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