To a girl who I loved

Everything happens for a reason hey Fee..
I need to know HOW you let her go ~ very strong and brave of you!
I have a big problem with goodbyes, even when they're obviously over-due!
Thank God Friendship is Eternal, and we'll never have to say goodbye!
Love and Joy to YOU!!
Love, Suzie :-D

Love your lines, especially "Wet waves hit my toes"--I can picture and feel the waves--real and metaphorically. Lots of sound effects!

Hey Felix, the past is the past and sometimes should be left where it is, for we can never go back and expect things to remain what they once were. You taught me this dear Cuz, take your own advise.
Love ya face, even more now that I've spent time here with you,
Till later, Love your Cuz XOXO Rose

Ah, yes, I've gone back to those shores and let the water wet my toes again and wonder. We all do what we feel we need to do at the time. I know there have been beginnings of relationships that just didn't go where I wanted them to yet fuller things have taken up their space. And then there are those moments when words like this come to our minds. Words of longing and those are the ones the angels hear. Many say to make your wish list and be careful what you ask for because you just might get it. Then again you may get more then you think you can handle. I just leave it up to the Universe to send me what I need. Good write. Breathe deep and let your mind wander. Lady J

you never know, Felix ... i too let loose a girl who i loved when i was young ... i later found out, she killed her husband and committed suicide ...

A haunting poem of lost love, Fee ... A most touching pen ... Happy Father's Day, Fee ... hugs - T

Fee,,,,you know i can relate to the "if onlys" myself ,,,great write from your heart ....that touched mine. xxxx Dusty

Ahhhhh.. I have this pict. too! It's a soulsearcher!
This write is felt deeply Sweet Fee!
YOur pen slips tears out one by one
upon our hearts of past loves!
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
STAy INspired!
STay POsitive

So sad Fee!! Beautifully written.
Hugs, Laura

This is a heartbreaker, Felix. You did a great job with this!

Love,
Susan

Fee,
Beautiful poem of regret and heartbreak. I think within all of us is one person that will always make us wonder 'what if'. How diffeently would life have turned if 'if only' I'd done this or that. Another amazing write from you.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Beautiful touchy write!!

Love Tinka

Felix, wonderful pen...loved it!

thanks,
dan

Beautiful work, Felix. Takes my breath away and made me remember my own regret. Thanks for this.

(((Fee))),

Deeply longing, poignant verse: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Excellent write, Fee; very well done yet again! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

A very powerful and Intense feelings of
Desire and regret wishing longing and yearning
CALL HER she may be feeling the same as you!!
What can you lose?
Take the first step pick up the phone!
Outstanding write Fee!!
Love Peace and Happiness...Yolie

Suger! You need to give it one more try, call her, she just might be pining for you too! Even if it don't work out, at least you tried! This was too sad for words! HUGS! SC

Wonderful write but oh so sad dear cuz.

Love & hugs

Fee, this is so sad. Heartbreak over past mistakes can be truly difficult to swallow. I wish you well.

Flows like waves, emotions expressed so well, Felix. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara

What a picture this created. A man standing just at the waters edge as it sorrowfully touches just the tip of his toes reminding him of the last kiss of so long ago. Beautiful, Fee.

A fish story with a difference here. The one that got away..
Sad, yet totally understandable, as I think we all let one get away in our lives.

Hugszzzz Ch'erie

Fee,
How difficult it is to look back and say ...but if I'd only
I sincerly appreciate your honest heartwrenching poem...I too know of that pain.
Hope you are feeling better...physically, that is....

Walt

I think my regret was not letting go...lol. I love this poem It's beautiful.
God bless,
PB

a beautifully sad write-

Write about the sea plus love and you've sung my song Fee. Big Bravo for this one. When can I expect it? You file is empty and lonely.
Hugs,
Marcia