Stardust (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amy Feemster

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

very sad very beautiful, you've captured a woman's torment I hope she finds light somewhere,Amy

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

heart wrenching...

Chrissy

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Well penned, Lady J

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

A very potent, heartfelt write dear cuz, the cruelity I can relate to in many ways. God bless and give strength to those out there who still endure such brutality and heartlessness.

Love you
Selena

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Oh, Fee, this is so powerfully and hearbreakingly written. You did it beautifully.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

When no means no, and when please? means don't do it...
Brutality comes when morals are thrown out of the window, the first window being the one at home.

Georg

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Fee,a heart breaking write to the reality of the real world...shame
this abuse does happen to many (boys and girls)I have to appauld you
for standing up and writting about the stupidity of folks that let
this happen...Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

such a tragic tale so well expressed in and between these lines--a tender write

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

My dear Fee, you have a heart that shows just how much you care for those around you...the lost, the lonely, the wounded. An excellent poem, love Holly

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Well written, and sad
this one tugs at the heart........humanity is so cruel...
sigh
pax Anita

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Sdaly these abused recall this as Love at times. We never know what bad is until we read something like this.So sad.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Thank you so much Felix for realizing that all girls aren't bad, there are so many innocent ones who will do anything to survive espically if they have a child, it's hard to see the pain and suffering and so many have no one to turn to but the strangers on the street who are so willing to abuse them with a few dollars for their own cheap thrill. Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Powerful stuff, Fee. Filled with sadness and longing for better days. I wonder if her trampled on soul and paid for lust could be saved by real love.
Just a thought,
Becca~

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Happy B.Day wishes Fee,

this story is angst and compassion all mixed in...the heart pains just knowing these abuses exist and the innocent victums they produce...all that human potential buried under shame, guilt, fear...a wasted lifetime...then there is the hope that some miracle would leap forward to reawaken the victum back onto its rightful place...but who are we to say...perhaps she shall touch the life of a client instead and provide "stardust" in some other meaningful way, and all was just as it was meant to be anyway...sigh...oops waxing philosophical here...best for me to let it go...