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Taking You Back (In Time)
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Taking You Back (In Time)

by: Fee

 

Baby if I could take you back in time

You’d see just what you mean to me

Change my whole life and make it new

Make it then what it now should be

 

You’d be the little girl in pig tails

Who lived just down the lane

The one I had my first crush on

I see you as her now and again

 

You’d be the girl in Junior High

Who kissed me for the first time

Such a thrill to watch you blossom

Then I would have made you mine

 

The girl who held my sweating hand

The date I had for my first dance

The one that stirred new feelings

With just a simple smiling glance

 

The first young lady that I made love to

In the back seat of my old Camaro car

I know I would have loved you then

I think I even saw you in a star

 

You’d be the one I walked down the aisle for

Then the perfect loving mother to our child

A sweet angel beside me on Sunday morning

And a seductress who always drives me wild

 

No ,I can’t really take you back in time

Or change the things that went before

But believe me when I tell you girl

You’re those memories and so much more…

 


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 Reviews of "Taking You Back (In Time)"
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
A Camaro? Oh this is Priceless
:) "Smiling"
Cherrypie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Fee,
It's always nice to see this soft side of you. Very sweet:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
i love the sweetness of theis one!

Reviewed on July 8, 2009
to be loved like this from the start would be a true blessing to know & experience...
This is beautiful through you
Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
like an aged oak ruby vintage, you just get better and better, Felix... I haven't reviewed, but your latest Romance items truly pierced my heart and it seems you write from a pure seam of gold when concentrating most on this love-lorn theme. I can certainly see why you picked that picture to match!!!!! And I thought girls being "forward" was a "new" thing... is she a young Mae West?! This is an adoration that is most keenly written and felt: humble and humbling in the best possible way. Love it! :)) xx

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
This is another tearjerker in its bittersweet beauty-when you write about this subject matter, it seems to just flow from your pen. I really love this one, and that photo is a great match.

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
a lot of romantic poetry been written today. Brings back some good memories.

Reviewed on July 7, 2009
Precious picture and memories in verse - well done, Fee.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
A REALLY GOOD WRITE...THE IMAGERY AND RHYME SCHEME ARE JUST WONDERFUL IN THIS WONDERFUL WRITE ON REMINISCING. ENJOYED AND THANKS MUCH FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
Awe, what a sweet and tender love poem. One of your best Fee. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
Wonderful memories, Mr. Fee, and a wonderful photo, too.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
Certainly that "Camaro" clocked a lot of "miles"! ! !

Georg


Reviewed on July 6, 2009
Right on, Fee. Powerful and full of imagery.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
Awwww, what an adorable photo! How absolutely loving and sincere...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
You are a man after my poetic heart Fee!!!!!! This is so tender and beautiful

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
Ohh you are such a sweetie Cuz and it shows through your words. thank you for sharing another great one.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
Felix, this is the stuff of real romance -- poetry such as you have penned here is what has earned poetry the prestigious title of, the prefered reading of romantics 'round the world -- I enjoyed this greatly -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
A lucky lady who'd find a man like you, willing to write romantic & poetic poetry & take her back in time to a much better time in rhyme...E & R

Reviewed on July 6, 2009
Awww, Fee, this is soo cute! Adorable piccy and sweet write; well penned/illustrated; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
...this is sprinkled with sweetness and coated with romance....I love the full circle feel,,,beautiful Fee
Christine


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