Drowning (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 4, 2011

We are lucky when we have someone to throw the life preserver:) Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on April 1, 2011

Just the right words from one we love can make us feel like we've been rescued from drowning, that's for certain. Nicely written piece, Fee. ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on March 31, 2011

Fee, When you are blue love is all you need to keep you afloat! Take care, and hugs to you!! ~Chessly

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on March 31, 2011

Nicely done Fee. "Hopes on scraps of paper,,,," a very familiar tune, I have hundreds of em.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on March 31, 2011

Beautiful poetry, Fee! Your phrasing is captivating.....

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 31, 2011

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

love is a life preserver that keeps us afloat ...

quite a moving poem, Felix ...

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Watch the mail for an extra-strength life preserver! No way I am risking losing you, Felix LeRoy Perry!!

Veddy, veddy clever, your wordship, sir.

Hate that the storm clouds came along. You look so happy in the photo you posted. Boat looks rad!

Always write, and always stay you,

Jesnother Foolsparader
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoX

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Love and life Felix are seas filled with life preservers. Some we are capable of reaching and use to save ourselves. Others will always be located, just out of our reach. It is therefore incumbent upon us to remain tenacious and committed to survive. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

so well done, like the water color. Morgan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Learning to swim might help, though drowning in love sounds to be quite the good idea...e

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

In the sea of love we are just like Captain Kirk and toilet paper searching for Klingons.

~W~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Beautiful write, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

A heart filled with love shared with all. Great write Cuz.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Very well done as always, paying the romantic price.

John

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Excellent write, Fee.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Excellent, Felix. You made it concise. You made it simple. You made it profound. All of that I've said made me like it.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 30, 2011

Were it not for those life preservers at crucial times we may well drown in sorrow. I can so relate to this deep emotional reflection.
Blessings,
Christine