Exposed (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 6, 2012

Wow on this one Felix, I sure would like to know who this is for. It's deep alright.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO Rose

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 24, 2012

they are everwhere here in cyber space
and the den is not immune to them...
is it a man pretending to be a woman?
or a woman pretending to be a man?
is it a married man revealing his gay secret?
well the lists are long & some are just pathetic

With Authenticity & Love
Vickie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 24, 2012

OK my mind went somewhere else with the title ;) LOL

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 24, 2012

Bold, shivery and eloquent writing!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 24, 2012

this, Fee, is tight rich writing of a high order
Yes!

john

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Tru e.....fool me once shame on you...true... Great write! Best wishes,neerja

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Fee, I would wager most of us have met
someone like you have written about...Enjoyed!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Deep....and yes this is 'self-explanatory', sometimes people are hand-made complicated (meaning by their own hand), makes me dizzy~
hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

"Hiding behind guise of an angel....." How could we know the same person?

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Well crafted in image to verses Fee.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

I have said on many occasion that "pain makes the pen fly" but, in this instance, not only is this a masterly-crafted felt piece but is absolutely acute in its imagery and pin-pointing detail. I can sense the tautness of the cheeks that are pinched with the regret at having to articulate such pain, Felix. That last line, though an oft-used phrase, is heart-stopping due to where and how it is placed. How your big heart bleeds here. :(( Bless you, xx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Nicely written, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Cleverly written and very meaningful as always great poetry Laura

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

and a guise it is...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Amen! Nicely done, Fee...

Anna

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

As you say, "All will face a day of reckoning" Unfortunately those who do the reckoning can often be bought, (at least until the day of that final reckoning.)

NICE!!! Dick

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

Felix
well done, I like your use of visions
Budd