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Enchanting Moonlight
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*~ Enchanting Moonlight ~* *Sand still holding the warmth* *gathered throughout the day* *surf crawling up the beach* *sandpipers scurry to get away* *Seagulls glide and dip on a breeze* *like air dancers, not making a sound* *The sun glides across the sky* *kissing the sea as it slowly slides down* *Like a silver gossamer scarf* *across waves, the moonlight drapes* *under velvet skies where stars were tossed* *a night made for romantic escapades* *Come my love and lie with me* *in the warmth of the sand* *emotions transcending erotic bliss* *explored with passions hand* *Rapturous warmth will cover us* *as surf slowly kisses our length* *with foamy fingers caressing each curve* *softly, then gaining strength* *Moonlight enfolding us* *in an amorous golden glow* *glistening in the drops of moisture* *as they slide like silk to our toes* *The seductive songs of the sea* *over us hover* *sandy warmth beneath us* *on this night for lovers* *� 2006* *Carole Mathys*

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

outstanding Carole like a cool sea brezze
to cleans one's soul
I loved it
Thanks for sharing

Love & peace
William

Reviewed by Amy Avatar (Reader)

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

So breathtakingly enchanting...
I was able to experience "Enchanting Moonlight"
through your word paint.
Amy Ramdass

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

The seduction of words upon a beach kissed by you touch.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Moonlight and the sea; a perfect setting for love, Carole. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

Carole,

Ab-so-lute-ly beautiful. Imagery; verse; a complete package that leaves me breathless...and wishing I'd written the darn poem! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

The image and the poem were both beautiful Carole, may the muse keep inspiring you
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Refined libidinal fuel igniting the dynamo of sensuality to reach Venus and Cupid's realms in the "Enchanting Moonlight".

"Enchanting Moonlight" leads one through the eroscosmos ~and let one never short of imagination~ for the aroma of desires is felt in every word.

Beautiful!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

And Romance reigns, as your sensuous words and pictures painted for the mind hold sway over the imagination. Truly a prize, Carole! May I assume you have experienced this and write from first hand memories? <grin> Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Fantastic atmosphere and ambience created with just the right sultry tones and textures, Carole! I have noted that you paint pastorals so very well, but, here mixed with eroticism and romance, the effects are 3-D!! Dusky and sensuous, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Carole, this poem is my new favorite;-) Wow! A romantic feast of sensual beauty by the sea with the moon for a backdrop, and your glistening words so beautifully said,like sliding over satin. Can you tell I love it!;-)Splendid work!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Absolutely beautiful all the way!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Beautifully portrayed and an exquisite romantic poem.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Love on the sand beneath a beautiful moon? Ah, my, my yes. You broght back some pleasing recollections and I thank you for that.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

I love the moon, so this poem really touched me. Very nice writing, Carole; enjoyed much~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

I like the sea -- so this poem is particularly beautiful for me. R