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Out of Body
by Neale Sourna → (All Poetry by Neale Sourna)
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It is harshest, in there.
Painful.
Coldest burn.
A night’s long screaming shriek, in there.
In my body.

They think I’m in there.
Safe-like.
Logical.
But safe is distance, arm’s length.
Logic is non-existent, up-ended.
As we float in front.
Beside.
Behind.
A façade of ourselves, to ourselves.

I am out of body, out here.
Monroe,
Marilyn.
Norma Jean’s children lost, out here.
Unsoiled,
And Perfect.
Because this body is mine, not yours.
Senses renewing, anchoring me,
As we re-enter selves, be ourselves.
In you.
In me.
Home inside our bodies. My body.
  

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 Reviews of "Out of Body"
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
Nice tone to this poetry... Thought provoking!
Roger and Birgit

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

A full Poetry's compliance. "Out of Body" is rich in contents and
symbolistical imagery, delivering a poetic grand.

Keep posting, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 21, 2005
Very philosophical and spiritual composition Neale
Peter

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
Enjoyed the set-up, flow, and content here, Neale.

Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Hmmm. this is a deep one!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
A lot of great phrases, a little hard to "get" in certain spots, but overall a fine piece of work.

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
This feels so real! Our bodies are not us - just something pretending to be us. Well done!
Monette

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Awesome write. Powerful write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Great message in this intriguing poem!
I like your self-control! Well done!

etw

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Very powerful write. R

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
powerful words


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