The seed that grew this rose
formed long ago.
It was something like a pearl
that fell from God’s loving eyes
and planted itself deep inside
the mysteries of this chaotic world.
The roots made their own space
and spread out through love shared
between people common to our lives:
your son Moses and my sister Vera.
Blessed by angelic silence
and nurtured by ancient wisdom
the seedling stem of this sky blue rose
broke through dirt and concrete
like a revelation foretold
breaking through the ignorance
of those too blind to see
and those too afraid to hear.
Then came the pain of thorns
produced from bitter experience.
And the unfoldment of elegant green leaves
developed out of secret knowledge
and the clear spiritual vision
of a humble dreaming prophet.
That we are able to honor
and share with one another
the bright pieces of heaven inside us
is what makes the rose
of this sacred kinship blossom all year round.
It is what anoints our lives in a holy way
with this rose oil perfume
of sweet grace, good faith, and enduring love.
Aberjhani
© 13 August, 2005
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Continued blessings to you Aberjhani,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Peace,
Joselyn
Lovely poem and like the previous commentator said.... love the language and of course the way you depicted the idea.
~ Mari
God bless, Aberjhani!
Sandie.
I can only stutteringly repeat the well-chosen words of those who have commented... whatever you write, whether the substance of poetry or the encouragement of review, it is as if the gift of speech has been created for the very first time to awaken our senses to the wonder of communication that is all at once involving of the whole of the material, physical and supernatural worlds. Words are given fresh meaning with your voice and vision and reach us on every conceivable plane to create a holistic experience.
This tribute not only honours this great man's passing, but is the oil which perfumes and eases his passage for those who remain. What a gift!
Bless you and thank you. Kate xx
Regis
Aberjhani',
You're an Ardent Fire creating Holy Goodness's wisdom and
placing us all closer to God!
You have a Holy talent and a gift of constance that's unwavering
and your expressions are AmonG THE BEST INSPIRED BY THE HIGHEST!
Be blessed with real joyfilled life and healthy creative long life
in unity with those you love!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
You have the rare gift of allowing your readers to feel, if only for the moment they are wrapped within your words, the admiration and compassion you emanate for your subject, be it physical, spiritual or emotional! Really gorgeous tribute!
Blessed are those that are stimulated to create, when the natural
feelings seem to show losses...
"A Blue Rose for the Sergeant" is reverently delivered from the garden of the One that knows the importance of the aroma of friendship.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Take care
Chanti
Paul
Many blessings of Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Take care,
Sherry
A most heartfelt tribute to a great man. I'm sorry for your loss--your pain is clearly evident in these powerful, poignant words, beautifully illustrated in verse and imagery. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Love Tinka
Eileen
TP
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D