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Aberjhani
1.
Once you were a singer for God--
yes, you, who within your mother’s womb
dodged the hooks and poison sent
to eclipse your light before it shined;
who, abandoned in a field of serpents
clapped hands to the hissing of fanged omens.
Born in a year of misbegotten moons,
Louie the good mad angel found you too late.
Already blackened by the high noon sun,
already diseased by rejection,
one hand reaching for the world you’d left,
one grabbing for a stranger’s lonely tit.
On the island of Daufuskie you mistook
the smell of dead crabs for that of roses.
How you stuffed your mouth with the psalms
steamed and served by a grandmother’s tears––
ignoring the whip that broke your back,
and the ridicule that gutted your heart.
2.
An outrageous instinct to love and be loved
blinded your arms to lines of propriety––
Women and Men, Christians and Jews,
Muslims and Buddhists, white, black, red, brown.
An outrageous instinct to love and be loved
executed your brain every hour on the hour.
3.
No one knew how you transformed
scars on your back into scented songs
pleasing to a church’s nostrils. Or how
the imprisonment of your son
and the murder of your daughter
coated your tongue with heaven’s favor.
Brother was that you screaming like a wheel
burning inside a wheel, watching the stars
of your fate reconfigure a chosen destiny
into crimson midnights of tragedy?
Was that your mind running naked through the West
while your soul warbled haikus in the East?
Once you were a singer for God––
who baritoned superbly life’s incongruities
until 72 years old you sat on concrete steps
humming, “what the world needs now.” Is what?
The gun in your mouth was nothing like a song,
your exploded skull one jacked up finale.
Aberjhani
© 9/30/2006
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
God Bless
Lena
this hits the gut with intensity
wow
pax A
Love,
Dove
Peace,
Carolyh
in admiration
Paul;-)
This is the seed planted in all hearts by the Creator. The other very powerful motivator "fear" seems to take over, like a weed in Life's Beautiful Garden, so many precious lives. That's when the singing stops.
Love & Light,
Joseph
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And, by the author, an awareness, however hated, an accepter of the differences in Singers, no matter how unequivocal, and their fates.
Yet, is fate unequivocal?
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
excellent poetic narrative ...
Regis
A profound and intriguing story... "Once Was a Singer for God" paid its due to Poetry.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Chrissy
Peace. Joyce
I'm listening to Elvis singing Rags to Riches and how his voice soars -climbs the stairway to paradise, so he does. :-) best wishes kenny
What a tragic ending in vitriolic and reactionary terms..
It makes no sense to survive the vicissitudes and trials of life, and then to throw it all away in such dire circumstances..
Wonderful and dynamic portrayal of an anguished soul who has hit skid row..
Peter
Eileen
There is certainly Truth and the "appearance" of Truth.
I am always amazed, especially when my blessed wife Michele and I cinch up the packs and head into the mountains to hike, how much in nature is the antithesis of the real.
Much that appears as flowers are really weeds. Same genetic structure ... roots, stems, leaves, and blossoms, but one is an imposter and the other isn't.
You construct Aberjhani ... ONCE WAS A SINGER FOR GOD reminds me about how much in this world can deceive you with an appearance. We can even deceive ourselves, if we're not insghtful and careful enough, into believing that we're something we're not.
A sobering write Aberjhani ... masterfully done ... with a shocking ending that is laced with the threads of what embracing cardboard realities can do to us.
Bravo!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Take care,
Sherry
Excellent pen my dear Aberjhami.I close my eyes and smell the oyster beds nearby. You gave me magic in all emotional senses.
Love,
Susan
Would love to hear it...did you put music to it too???
Love Tinka
RAge
Joselyn