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Once Was a Singer for God

by Aberjhani — Read all 107 poems by Aberjhani

from The Bridge of Silver Wings

Saturday, September 30, 2006


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Dear Readers,

Thank you for your interest in this title. I’m happy to announce it is now available in a new book that I invite you to view and purchase if you wish by clicking on The Bridge of Silver Wings

 

Aberjhani

 

1.
Once you were a singer for God--
yes, you, who within your mother’s womb
dodged the hooks and poison sent
to eclipse your light before it shined;
who, abandoned in a field of serpents
clapped hands to the hissing of fanged omens.

Born in a year of misbegotten moons,
Louie the good mad angel found you too late.
Already blackened by the high noon sun,
already diseased by rejection,
one hand reaching for the world you’d left,
one grabbing for a stranger’s lonely tit.

On the island of Daufuskie you mistook
the smell of dead crabs for that of roses.
How you stuffed your mouth with the psalms
steamed and served by a grandmother’s tears––
ignoring the whip that broke your back,
and the ridicule that gutted your heart.


2.
An outrageous instinct to love and be loved
blinded your arms to lines of propriety––
Women and Men, Christians and Jews,
Muslims and Buddhists, white, black, red, brown.
An outrageous instinct to love and be loved
executed your brain every hour on the hour.


3.
No one knew how you transformed
scars on your back into scented songs
pleasing to a church’s nostrils. Or how
the imprisonment of your son
and the murder of your daughter
coated your tongue with heaven’s favor.
 
Brother was that you screaming like a wheel
burning inside a wheel, watching the stars
of your fate reconfigure a chosen destiny
into crimson midnights of tragedy?
Was that your mind running naked through the West
while your soul warbled haikus in the East?

Once you were a singer for God––
who baritoned superbly life’s incongruities
until 72 years old you sat on concrete steps
humming, “what the world needs now.” Is what?

The gun in your mouth was nothing like a song,
your exploded skull one jacked up finale.

 Aberjhani

© 9/30/2006
 



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Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2006
Suicide is a terrible thing and solves no problems. If a person has a problem with God it is probably because his foundations were not perfect. Victor

Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Oh no!!!!!!! What a sad ending!!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Quite a poem this one, Aberjhani...so sad in the end, so terribly sad. Life is short and precious...ending it this way is unfortunate. All the same, an incredible story.

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
What an incredible story........Who lived such a life? Is this a true story or a fable.........
this hits the gut with intensity
wow
pax A

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2006
You are an incredible poetic genious!!!!!!!!! I partake your soul's muse as infinate and the touch of the prophet---

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 3, 2006
Raw and richly woven verse, Aberjhani.
Peace,
Carolyh

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
What can I say to this that will not sound like sucking up, trivial platitudes or hokus-pokus, spiritualized bullshit? Such is the power of your poetry. And I know you know I said something before. ;-) I went out last night, saw Jet Li in FEARLESS, came back and deleted my other review about love. Funny how my mind works. Love, peace, and the one heart to you, Skylark. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
A powerfully profound and tragic masterpiece, as always, extremely well crafted and delivered. 'Once Was a Singer for God' is an Outstanding work my friend.

in admiration
Paul;-)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
"to love and be loved"

This is the seed planted in all hearts by the Creator. The other very powerful motivator "fear" seems to take over, like a weed in Life's Beautiful Garden, so many precious lives. That's when the singing stops.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed on October 2, 2006
There is deep pain and sadness in your lines, Aberjhani; powerfully expressed song of sorrow. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
This has the feel of Fallen Angels, a tragedy unveiled...

And, by the author, an awareness, however hated, an accepter of the differences in Singers, no matter how unequivocal, and their fates.

Yet, is fate unequivocal?

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
life can transform the righteous and good into the disillusioned and dismayed ... losing sight and purpose to celebrate the songs of god, they come to the conclusion they can only pronounce the gurggles of darkness and spilled blood ... a tragic end for a tormented soul who destiny was immersed in misfortune and whose music died having lost its will to sing ...

excellent poetic narrative ...




Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
I am having a very bad day so I am sorry my words are not worthy of your write. It sure does not mean that I disrespect what you have written. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

A profound and intriguing story... "Once Was a Singer for God" paid its due to Poetry.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
As always, your words are very powerful and thought-provoking...

Chrissy

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Aberjhani, a powerful write. One never knows what goes on in another's heart, mind, life. I am often of incomprehensible mind of why people do the things they do, especially to others.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Powerful narrative, Aberjhani. Hearts on fire like this are rare. 'Singers lend us their pain.' I always remember that line of Wilde's.

I'm listening to Elvis singing Rags to Riches and how his voice soars -climbs the stairway to paradise, so he does. :-) best wishes kenny

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Aberjhani

What a tragic ending in vitriolic and reactionary terms..

It makes no sense to survive the vicissitudes and trials of life, and then to throw it all away in such dire circumstances..

Wonderful and dynamic portrayal of an anguished soul who has hit skid row..

Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Sometimes I think we are all lonely souls never really understood by anyone, nor do we in turn understand others ,or what to expect from each other.A sad lament for one who struggled 72 years to survive only to ask , what for? If only we were better at learning life's purpose or in our relationships...Superb poetry that sears the senses, Aberjhani!

Eileen

Reviewed by Miriam Center
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
I have often wondered if it is bravery or cowardice that allows a man to take such action. Who are we to say?

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A personal overview ...

There is certainly Truth and the "appearance" of Truth.

I am always amazed, especially when my blessed wife Michele and I cinch up the packs and head into the mountains to hike, how much in nature is the antithesis of the real.

Much that appears as flowers are really weeds. Same genetic structure ... roots, stems, leaves, and blossoms, but one is an imposter and the other isn't.

You construct Aberjhani ... ONCE WAS A SINGER FOR GOD reminds me about how much in this world can deceive you with an appearance. We can even deceive ourselves, if we're not insghtful and careful enough, into believing that we're something we're not.

A sobering write Aberjhani ... masterfully done ... with a shocking ending that is laced with the threads of what embracing cardboard realities can do to us.

Bravo!

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
This is such an emotional and colorful write, Aberjhani, though the ending left me slumped over my keyboard trying to muster enough strength to swallow the entirety of the verses as well as the sour lump in my throat. How do we get so far removed from what is real and what we know to be the truth? The constant battle between good and evil encompasses the world as well as dwelling within each of us, but understanding that we are each a beacon of love-light for the people of the earth, needs to become our focus. No amount of suffering should sway us away from our chosen pathway, and we must remain centered in our thoughts if we are to reach the destiny we desire. As always, you ROCK! Your words are like vibrant paint on an old, dusty canvas and your abilities as a storyteller never cease to amaze me. Hail Poet!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Since I've visited Daufuskie Island I see the visuals there still beckoning from long ago. I have the visual that knows the pain and still embraces the dream. I hear the spiritual humming that still stays inder the porches to seep out at daylight. You write the human experisnce with the yearning of the character of days gone by.
Excellent pen my dear Aberjhami.I close my eyes and smell the oyster beds nearby. You gave me magic in all emotional senses.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
This is a sad but mighty good song!!

Would love to hear it...did you put music to it too???

Love Tinka

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A bitter write, an unequivocal accusation against the absence of sanity and compassion of society. We should be ashamed that spirits like the ones in your vigorously expressive poem go to waste because of our utter inability to care of eachother. We are full of it and lack the wit to realize how far we have degenerated as a race that labels itself intelligent. I respect your talent and the way you apply it. Take care,

RAge

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
The ending so explosive to this one excellent expressions.

Joselyn


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