The final "s" in the poem is turned into the sound of a gust of wind or a gentle wave. The highest voice has most of the text, while the lower voices sing "surrender" in its original and increasingly abridged forms. The last line (which, by the way, sounds very biblical!) is spoken. The style of the music was suggested both by medieval polyphony and Tibetan Buddhist chant.
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Gave me goosebumbs!!
Love Tinka