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We Built This City
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Building a collective tomorrow


Poem Artwork

We Built This City



Perservering to build
a modern-day medieval
city


to transport us to
another time and
place.


The renaissance of
the gong
chases away evil
spirits, warns of
interlopers, heals
the sick, and
invokes the dead.


Surrounded by a
permanent unbroken
wall,


erected in solidarity,
fortified by the toil
of limestone poets
and sandstone novelists
building a collective
tomorrow.


Building communal
walls around an
island in a tidal
estuary,


the strata on which
the walls are built,


prone to subsidence
and constant ebb
and flow


and nature's feudal
emotions and
idiosyncrasies.


Unified intelligentsia,
following the directive of
their lead poet,


archaeologists
access the vulnerability
assailed by tide.


We built this city Wall
on a gravel bed with rubble
and mortar.


The advent of artillery, the
Wall becomes redundant
as a defensive structure.


The novelist inspects
projecting pilasters of
superb erotic sculpture,
stone lotus and dancing
nymphs carved on the
caryatid.


The lead poet summons
his well-read, calciferous
disciples to the freestanding 
stone wheels under the
chariot pulled by celestial
stone equines, to the
heavens,


and the lead poet recites


building a collective
tomorrow.


We Built This City.


 


Copyright 2005 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "We Built This City"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
Love it!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
I think this is my favorite write of yours now. This poem elevates the spirit and charges the imagination, creating a celestial palace in the mind. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
Ephemeral imagery deliverd with a powerful voice, 'building a collective tomorrow', superb Sage.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
Love the powerful voice behind this write!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
I wrote a poem ages ago about having no boundaries - through having had personal sovereignty breached and plundered - like the looting of a city whose walls have been broken down. So this poem is very strengthening to me personally, Sage. 5th stanza about limestone poets and sandstone novelists makes the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end, tying together the enduring and the ephemeral, perhaps, in collective effort. Walls around an island is an interesting concept; suggests that complacency is invalid: if we are not progressing we are regressing - there is no standing still; no stilling of the eroding tides. Status quo is an illusion. And collective consciousness is a very funny thing - wrote a poem at the weekend entitled San Mistico about the effects of all energy gathering towards and disappearing in the deep throat of one such "lead poet": at the sound of a Bermudan Triangle!! :)) Like the notion of being calciferous... have always felt a bit of an old dinosaur! Fantastically illuminating and inspiring... Brad Pitt in the lead role??!! Hmmm, maybe not! TY, Kate xx

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
Excellent fusion of communal conviction and chant-like rhythms in WE BUILT THIS CITY. Enjoyed this powerful piece tremendously.

Reviewed on December 20, 2005
WOW!! Terrific write, Sage; very well done! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
What an extraordinary vision you've penned here, Sage.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
Thanks Sage, now I can't get that song out of my head..."we built this city on rock n' roll"...;) Ed

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
You showcase your latent creative and intuitive skills and talents
in this powerhouse of a write Sage
Heavy and laden with symbolism and allegory that relates to the age old principle of building your house on firm foundations, constantly refreshed by the clear running waters of imagination and psyche
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 20, 2005
And it sounds like you built it very well.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 19, 2005
the city is the center of poetic adventure

the collective dawn of motion

the calm at the end of commotion

the wall that is invisible to dreamers
for they can see through its design

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2005
Yes, Chrissy, I too am finding out the marvel of Sage's wordplay. THIS was groovy, as we used to say back in the stone age.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on December 19, 2005
Sage, you are an unbelievable wordsmith!


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