The raw oil of your body
I founded upon nightly
intimacy and spiritual
alliance from your whispery
voice to the gentle caress
to mutual masturbation and
you heard it
a supernova of ecstasy
reciprocating pleasure
fed the fire of passion
and you heard it
you and I were the ancient
passage of galactic spirals
in their motions through
the heavens and you heard it
intense orgasm was a
by-product of right
spiritual focus and
you heard it
you propelled into the
higher altitude with me
of higher spiritual love
and raptor and you heard it
Soaringly good write, Sage; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2006
In your adept way of writing you have given us the wheretofore and the history of that big bang we find within ourselves when we "get off." Layering the celestial and ancient spells in one smooth poem about the act of physical release and heavenly delight. Write on!
‘I have to go back soon,’ says Adam one afternoon. Yes, I know he has to go back soon. He has to go back to London and to his job and his apprenticeship. He has taken the maximum number of days leave – he has taken his entire Summer holiday in the Sp
‘I have to go back soon,’ says Adam one afternoon. Yes, I know he has to go back soon. He has to go back to London and to his job and his apprenticeship. He has taken the maximum number of days leave – he has taken his entire Summer holiday in the Sp
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)