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The Sound of Rain

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

Painting METAMORPHOSIS OF NARCISSUS by Salvador Dali


An example of a TROCHAIC pentameter:

NEver NEver NEver NEver NEver

Tuesday, November 8, 2005


Poem Artwork
Humble green-blue carpet
is ruled with silver and gold,
to say the sun is shining.
On this corrupt moral sea,
of glass or dreams, lie flowers
in baskets of desires....

God knows what they are
between cerulean forms and shapes,
rendered regularly round
dreamy roses and tridentate
leaves of gleaming gold:
green, green, and green.... 

Five roses and ten stems,
billions in refuge,
thorns ripping flesh
as the basket stays afloat,
standing on the horns of blue.

Trailing up, to the ceiling,
to the windows,
to the smoky corridors
where the day
flows and blows in
the ornate curtains to
the sound of rain....
     
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Reviewed on November 10, 2005
Wonderful poem that flows very well when read. Welcome back, Deb!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 9, 2005
I like the way the images unfold and yet offer no explanation, and it is almost as if the sense of what is offered is impossible to get a handle on. In this way, I feel that the final stanza leads the mind and the eye away from "impossible" conundrums of "the ways of the world", delicately pointing upwards and outwards to seek answers and solace elsehwhere. The sound of rain is almost like an answer in itself. Have not a clue whether I am anywhere near any sort of mark with this one, Debs, but then maybe, that's the point?! :)) Rich diction counterpoised by the tranquility and neutrality of the idea of rain and water. Intriguing and dreamlike with much depth. TY Kate xx

Reviewed on November 9, 2005
Very inspirational poem. enjoyed the images created in this poem. Well come my fried. Long time no see you

Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
Reviewed on November 9, 2005
Very unusual and very well done. It intrigues me - the painting and your interpretaion. :) shoma

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 9, 2005
Let the global flooding begin... Debashish. A gripping read. Superbly expressed.
Peace & Light,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 8, 2005
You sneak, you! I should have known. I suppose everybody else did... your poetry is as flawless and as multi-dimensional as always. Hope you are well, Dawn


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