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NEW BORN
Floating and warm it was, and
very cozy inside Mummy's womb,
but now I am outside, don't liking
the no floating and feeling cold,
the sudden lights hurting my eyes
can't focus well, I am just born
to have enormous blurry faces of
crazy people saying googlelygoo!?
ONE YEAR OLD
I just turned one, experimenting,
first steps walk, nobody saw me,
exploring I went the new horizon
that are just above your bony knees.
I don't know why I get so tired
just to crawl from there to here,
maybe the distance is too great and
a stroller perhaps is all I need.
Born among gargantuan giants...
I duck, give way and watch the feet,
is all I can do to survive another day
when you are like me, a little kid.
Nursing was great, cozy and warm,
for it you don't need no accuracy,
but be careful or Mummy will say
"Ouch! suck baby, suck, but no teeth!"
ABOUT THE WORLD AROUND
Cupboards like enormous cathedrals,
hight chairs, out of reach for me,
from where I am, as a little child,
your "normal" world is too big for me.
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~hugs~
Karen
outstanding verse ...
That's the way I look at the universe
Peace
William
Be safe,
Karen
And yes Great grandchildren too
But the world Still too big for me I'm only 5Ft3
Beautiful written my friend.
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love Tinka
Eileen
I loved this poem mainly because I have grandchildren: 2 by my daughter, and 5 from my son. 5 of the 7 are all under age 5 so I can totally relate to to your very intuitive poem. It takes a lot of intuition to see everything through the eyes of a child. Your poem hits the nail on the head, and I enjoyed it!!!
Nancy
Often, through the eyes of a child, we can see perspectives and emotions that can help us understand and grow. Sometimes we can even escape the tunnel vision that we, as adults, develop about way too much around us.
Light and Wisdom ...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regis
Thanks,
Dan
Hugs, Laura
please!! 'Pea' <3 PS: Speaking as a former therapist, it is very important to kneel or bend down when talking to a child. Not just a matter of being heard, but of keeping the child from feeling
threatened or put at a distance. Love what you have said and the way you have said it! P:)