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Dear Santa
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Jimmy are sendind this letter which he hopes arrives on Xmas day.
Jimmy have a special request...


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dear santa


tonite is xmas and  you


gonna very busybe


droppin all the presents


but please no one to me ,


dad lost is job


so we havent a xmas tree


abd because he cant pay...


no electricity ,


mom want to do something


but she is verysick


please santa make her well


i be good boy, I promise ,


and to my dad a job


if you can give


to them this xmas present


i wont expect one for me


 


jimmy 9 year


 


ps. leave something to eat


      where the xmas tree used to be


 


ps.ps. give a hug to rudolph from me


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Dear Santa"
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
love in a young heart is wonderful. Tough to learn life's lessons so young though. Good write. Lady J

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Beautifully written You have touch my heart
And I'm sure many others with this write
I love the child's innocence and expressions of concerns
And love for his parents!
I know Santa will take good care of Jimmy and his parents too!
Excellent write Georg
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
If we could bottle up the innocent nature of a child, we could feed it back to them as a teenage antidote...and a Carter's liver pill for the adults...Everytime the "Furry Bear" commercial comes on TV, my daughter(4) screams out, "Mom, I want that!" I tell her, you have to tell Santa...so, she runs to the window, and speaks out to the birds, "Santa, could I have a Furry Bear, please!"
I melt in sheer reverence of the innocence...
Enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
love the childs expression, their truthful innocense is so refreshing...i bet santa takes good care of jimmy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
You have surely touched my heart with this piece. There are so many like this wonderful little boy and perhaps by the grace of God life will improve for him. I know the feeling well and pray their are good souls nearby to offer aid and food.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
the really sad part is that Santa will probably not reply ...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Very heart touching write Georg and I wish I could fill all the Innocent little Jimmy's wishes such as those in the world. To know there will be far too many without at this very special time of year. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
A heart touching offering Georg, sadly it happening in many homes...

Carole~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Deeply touched by this poem.... in it simplicity....a most powerful plea!!

God Blees those who care!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
This is a poem, but somewhere there are children who are facing such a Christmas. If you know of such a family, share your bounty - give them a wonderful Christmas.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Oh my, so very touching..beautiful writing sweet man...stay safe and well...Hugs

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Awe, you capture the innocence of a child well my friend. I always enjoy reading my students letters to Santa, but each year I am touched, disturbed, and overwhelmed with at least one letter in the stack. Last year I recall reading one little boy's letter that was very touching...he had previously asked Santa at a department store for a particular game system, in his letter he wrote he explained that Santa didn't have to buy him a game system that his mom was going to be able to get his game out of pawn before Christmas. As I silently read the letters tears stung my eyes. I knew that his mom who was a single parent of three boys was struggling but I didn't realize it was this bad, he explained to me later that his mom had pawned their game system to pay the electric bill. He was smiling when he replied that it was okay, she always got their games back. I quietly thanked the Lord for my blessings as I counted them one by one. We never know what others are facing and what is on the life on the other side of a child's innocent smile. Touching write my friend and a very realistic one as well...
Blessings & Happy Holidays,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
the sweet innocence of childhood. this is beautiful and so very touching, georg.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Jimmy has a caring and big heart,,hardships are far too many now,, May all the kids have warmth and happiness, and a Merry Christmas
Christine

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
A very sweet look inside the giving heart of a child.
Thank you Georg.

Walt

Reviewed on November 25, 2007
O, this one made me cry, Georg! Such simplistic lines from the heart of a caring little boy who is facing hard times! O, if Santa could only make his wishes come true...Heartbreaking write! Very well penned, bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
From the mouths of children, we often hear the most heartfelt pleas.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
So beautifully expressed, Dear One. This is a beautiful gift for all to treasure! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Hello, my friend -- this is so touching and well-written in the true spirit of Christmas. Your loving compassion simply gleams here. Well done.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on November 25, 2007
O, this one is s a d, Georg...may little Jimmy find all he desires, food, work for his Daddy, health for his Mama...and a little something for him, for his great big compassionate heart. Not asking too much...is it? POWERFULLY penned, my (((friend))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
A seasonal & Emotional write
peace be with you Brother

William

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Very touching and oh so real. True Christmas happens when we are concerned about such persons.

Larry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
It is often all too true that Christmas for some is often the bleakest day of the year instead of the happiest. This write is a reminder that we can all reach out this year and try to get back to the spirit of giving by giving to the less fortunate.

Fee


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