Emile Tubiana couldn't find it on my AD list of poems, I didn't either (you can check) so, I am reposting it and see what happens.
To Emile.
After leaving the smoldering burned forest
the Traveler entered another world, green,
like as if God had lost one of His emeralds
or perhaps He just wanted Creation so to be,
fields holding flowers and grass to be grazed
with fat cows and from nectar fat honeybees,
a mountain, one river here, and there a lake
where the Son don’t need to multiply the fish
because on all that plentiful landscape
He made sure that hunger could not exist.
Paradise? Hardly, just another humble valley
of an humble place welcoming wandering feet,
perhaps it has a name but he will never know
being a Traveler is departing, never coming in;
just finding bleaches bones of those that stayed
make to hurry his pace on the valley, through it,
too good to be true , faith will never help dissipate
any doubts you have if in it you don’t believe;
so, keep going Traveler until your hair gets caught
like Saul’s, and hear “why thou persecute me?”
Saw many lambs peaceful grazing, but no shepherd,
was because they were safe of any malignant enemy?
Or all the wolves, the bears and cougars got tamed
in this strange valley where all that is poor…is rich?
But why the silence? Where are all the little birds
that perched on high branches, as he go, will sing?
Shadows of words everywhere, the world is quiet,
are they expecting the Sublime Voice like him?
Only the almost inaudible sound of his many steps
disturb the absence of One playing hide and seek.
The Traveler stopped, thirsty, his dried out tongue
asking him that it was time for him to take a drink,
if he just would genuflect and let his hand to take
from the passing waters of the humble little creek,
he bent over and with hands together like praying
scooped a couple of small waves, on both knees,
thanking for that melting snow somewhere high up
taking pity of tired searching sinner you would think,
in a valley where tempting snakes weren’t allowed
and the growing among so many, of an apple tree.
The Traveler looking around saw the leaves moving,
caressed by the invisible hands of an invisible wind,
maybe he was deaf already after hearing so many lies
or it was the total absence of all truth punishing him…
This wasn’t a peaceful valley full of freedom promises
it was a place without answers silent and oppressive,
looking for God his heart rejoiced because in this place
he would find at last the Lord, but He wasn’t here,
if he were, he should have hear the Sublime Voice
asking as a father would, “why thou are looking for me.
SEARCHING...FOR WHAT WAS THERE ALL THE TIME. AN EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD WRITE THAT WAS DULY ENJOYED! THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Georg, I wish I could write like you. Maybe because I'm not searching anymore. No one can find Him anywhere except in our heart and you will never find anybody nor face anybody, you can only feel Him, in everyhing beautiful you can find, see, or feel. To make sure that it is what you are looking for, what you will feel is incomparable to anything you knew before and anything you have felt before in life. You have to be found strong and healthy, without any fear. Love Emile
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2009
Masterpoet, your words are fabulous.
Your tale is one I will add to my collection!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2009
Absolutely beautiful writing sweet man... as always a pleasure to read...stay safe and well...Hugss
Georg,
Your words are always poetic profusions of a true artist
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
when the den was being attacked/hacked with a virus or whatnot last year we all lost some of our submissions I think....so if this poem went missing it went missing when AD was fixing the issue. I lost about 2 or 3 posts
I love this write. We are all travelers, constantly searching for that green valley. So many beautiful lines! But my favorite is "The Traveler looking around saw the leaves moving, caressed by the invisible hands of an invisible wind..." That one leaves me breathless. Pure poetry...Lin
Being a traveler most of my life, and looking for answers I never seem to find, I found your poem quite profound, brother. As our sister Tiger Lily said, it deserves more than one read.
The movie is stuck my friend, in a timewarp so to speak, a silent movie no less, God is on the other side, at the projector, you want to find him, stop looking at the screen, go to the.....
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Deep, thought provoking lines tell of a man's Quest - when He's been near, all the time - as near as our heartbeat - if only we'll invite Him in when He knocks instead of making everything so danged complicated - well done.
Hi WE, You are a very profound man, Chief! You pen truths in a way no other has... "why thou are looking for me" indeed when he's been there all along... thank you for sharing...
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JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Your tale is one I will add to my collection!
Your words are always poetic profusions of a true artist
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
when the den was being attacked/hacked with a virus or whatnot last year we all lost some of our submissions I think....so if this poem went missing it went missing when AD was fixing the issue. I lost about 2 or 3 posts
EDWIN
Christine
Love,
tiger lily
Beautiful sentiment writing from the heart
Beautiful nice work expressing God's love
I am so glad you re-posted this poem
It’s amazingly beautiful!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light…Yolie
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Deep, thought provoking lines tell of a man's Quest - when He's been near, all the time - as near as our heartbeat - if only we'll invite Him in when He knocks instead of making everything so danged complicated - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Cynthia
In Spirit,
Bear
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)