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Flowing Water
by Lorri Proctor → (All Poetry by Lorri Proctor)
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I adore rivers, the lifeblood of a country. They are curvy, feminine, sinuous and magical.


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Flowing down the riverway I touch first one bank then the other
For nothing stays my course.  I carve my way
Through hillside, valley, slowly gently moving.
Whatever shape I make in this I stay contained
           But ever moving...
Moving on, restless sometimes: tumbling, cascading
In little waterfalls along the way.

Sometimes still and deep, I settle in some cosy hollow
And rest peacefully, let other creatures live in this soft stillness.
           Everywhere I appear different, everywhere
           I change my shape and sound form
           But never change the watery substance of my being.

All the rest is movement, flow and force.
My nature and my substance stays the same
            And so my goal.

Nothing stops my flow towards the sea
Towards the great, encompassing Mother of my Being.

 
 

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 Reviews of "Flowing Water"
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
The photo helps bring out the beauty of your wonderful poem. I can just imagine flowing, flowing, and then landing in a cozy, tranquil position at the bottom to just listen as the water flows around me.

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
like you, I love flowing water...this is a lovely piece of work and it meshes well with that delightful waterfall picture. Well done!

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 22, 2006
This is a nice poem and you expressed it well, viewing it from the flow of the water...nice...


Art Sun...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 20, 2006
flows beautifully ... wonderful ambiance ...

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
Touching picture, can almost feel the gentleness of the light drops pour into my soul, touching, refreshing, anointing...beautiful.
I truly enjoyed.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
What a beautiful description of water! I can almost feel its forceful and gentle flow through. I truly enjoyed reading this!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
Blimey, I'll never look at a river the same way, being a bloke who lurves curves....


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