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Winter Rain
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I won't forget passing this girl by in my hurry to get to the stores and forgetting to go back and give her a bit of money.


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Rain beating on the ground.
Swift eddies flowing into gutters;
Sticks swirling in the grey mud flow.
Hasty umbrellas pop up like mushrooms in the air.
 
Girl slumped upon the ground;
The thin, the creeping rain
soaking her trembling, shivering body.
Sad girl leaning against the shop window.
Lights hurt-bright and goods all shapes and colours
glitter behind her to tempt the passers-by.
They stop a fleeting, captured moment, then move on.
But she, sad, weeping girl, ignored.
 
Relentless stream of people; a stream
Casting humanity aside like flotsam
Cast up on a bank.
In winter rain.
 

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 Reviews of "Winter Rain"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 9, 2013
Nice visual!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
Sad, harsh, but very real; a moving and meaningful account well-shared, Lorri. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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