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My Haiku of Death
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Wednesday, April 25, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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APR252018 MY HAIKU OF DEATH pi-slices Separate - 180425 MY HAIKU OF DEATH Sliding down below. Where no one will dare to tread. Down the dark hollow. Darkness fills each side. Gravity, my enemy. No place left to hide. I keep falling down. Will I hit rock bottom hard? I won’t land on down. My descent goes fast. I've come to my bitter end. Life is in the past.
Susanne Leist

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Reviews of "My Haiku of Death"

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 29, 2018

Death is a bitter pill to swallow that won't go down for some. I don't particularly like haiku, but I certainly like you putting together several of them to make more clear your poetic intent.

Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on April 28, 2018

Very dark. Quite the idea for a good Sci-Fi!!! Or spiritual........

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 28, 2018

GREAT HAIKUS TO WHICH I CAN RELATE...BUT GOD! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on April 27, 2018

We all will die. It's a mystery and the question is why. Then if the Christians got it right we can get a ticket to live in love eternally. I don't like rolling the dice. We have choices which is nice. Nice poem Susanne. John Michael

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 27, 2018

A very dark poem that shows despair and disappointment in life. I hope this is just a poem and is not about your life in reality.

Sandie

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 27, 2018

Dark, mysterious and well written.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Susanne Leist

Reviewed on April 26, 2018

Thanks, John. I'm fixing it. My husband walked into the room talking, and I messed up.

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on April 25, 2018

Very interesting. The last one seems to have something missing in the second line, the 7-beat rhythm isn't there.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on April 25, 2018

You, Susanne, have absolutely found your niche. These dark poems of yours are so very, very good. You have it going for you, and I'm loving it!

Reviewed by Teddy Moon

Reviewed on April 25, 2018

Alice in Deathworld, hope she pops out on the side of life.

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