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The Unfinished
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
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As a half sculptured work of art,therein lies potential for the hands of a loving creative artist to complete ....

The Unfinished By Ch'erie de Perrot In this world of vanity ridden egomania amid hedonistic ideals, she walks boldly in the face of adversity alone with edenic needs. Ne'er proclaiming perfection, au contraire but with a desire to be held in esteem lasting and real, not surreal. If she could have but a moment in space and time to be the one and only, it would be worth a thousand years! Lain waste by the hapless vanity of infidelity by a mindless man who sought to cloak slouching shoulders with an oxens yoke Snatching integrity, loyalty and years not for the wasting till all that's left is a shell of a once former youthful lass Royalties spent on unerring diligence to self, with the truth hidden neath a pile of unwritten heartlines smudged in raw ink Words that will ne'er be completed nor spoken, as the writer places her quill in an unrecognized box, placing the paper... of dreams neatly next to it, marking with a still serenity, The Unfinished! Ch'erie de Perrot Copyright 2009 CAL Copyright Australia Ltd All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on September 14, 2007

Like the photograph, looks so much like something I would be doing...staring out over the water comtemplating. A beautiful portrait you have painted with your carefully chosen words...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Magnifique, Ch'erie! You quilled this one with prize ink!Kudo's!

Love,
eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Lain waste by the hapless vanity of immature mindless men <---you've written my shallow life in just a few words....)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

This might possible be your very best, young lady...best to family...Ed

Reviewed by George Carroll

Left for another time and place.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Hard to beat this poem my dear; you've written a masterpiece, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Beautiful writing sweet lady,love the picture..stay safe and well...Hugs

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Ch'erie,

Very well penned; brava! Love the graphic; beautiful!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on September 13, 2007

there is exquisite beauty in this write-i was completely drawn in-loved it!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Ch'erie,

This is poignant, effecting poetry; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

This is smashing Cherry Pie...so much emotion, dissappointment and a longing for that love that is hers. A love to inspire poetry, to etch a permanent smile to warm a heart on the coldest darkest day...but sad that it seems she had given up...

Fee