Very interesting write. Excellent imagery! LOL as I cringe as I almost hear the chalk screeching. Much deeper than meets the eye and a very written work of art. I'm very pleased I checked out your work today!
Ronald, this is an outstanding, "bare it all" poem. I especially like the third stanza. It is beautiful and tearful. Sad and uplifting, because you wrote it.
Refreshingly honest and courageous write Ronald..that dozen't shirk harsh reality.
Well Done
Peter
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2004
Pretty profound, even if I had to work to get to it, Ronald! (grin) This is one of those 'dig-down-deep' and be honest with oneself pieces... when both of those things are done, your universal truths become glaring. It's easy to shy away from these thoughts... you've written them unflinchingly. I applaud your bold, personal poetry here. katy xox.
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Very interesting write. Excellent imagery! LOL as I cringe as I almost hear the chalk screeching. Much deeper than meets the eye and a very written work of art. I'm very pleased I checked out your work today!
Nordette
this is or can be a new form of art
"scratchings on walls" i sure have done alot myself
excellent man excellent!!!
clever hook! :) and creative, effective write. you can stop with the chalk on the chalkboard now *cringe*
well done! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Masterfully done!!
Your what?????
YOUR NAME...OAKY!!
Love Tinka
two thumbs up for the presentation!Exceptional Ronald!;-)
Reindeer
Well Done
Peter