This is magnificent, Ron. Wonderful write.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
Ron, as we have all said since childhood, I'm entitled to my opinion and my opinion is that this magnificent poem is your best! Once read in its entirety, I went back and slowly savored single lines, even a word here, one there, like "liquidity."
By the time I reached that last verse, that last line, I could feel my skin goosebumpy... this is a flawless, layered piece. WOW! katy xox
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
God bless,
Sandie.
Safi
Love the pic too!
Love,
Eileen
Clinical and incisive analysis
Peter
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
By the time I reached that last verse, that last line, I could feel my skin goosebumpy... this is a flawless, layered piece. WOW! katy xox