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Perfect Girl
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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a poem that brought me to my senses as to what is deeply important


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Crying, she runs bare-chested
Her sawdust-covered shirt in hand
“It’s itchy, grandma, it’s itchy!”
“Go in the barn and shake it off, hurry.”

“I can’t, it’s itchy”, she wails.
Impatience surfaces within me. How will I get it all done?
It’s getting dark and chores aren’t yet done.
And…she still wants to ride her pony.

Sitting in the barn aisle with tear stained cheeks
The last tiny bits of wood fall from from her boot
Dusk is turning to dark all too quickly
I yell for her to hurry

Her upturned eyes are pooled with tears
“I bet you want another little girl,
A girl who doesn’t get into the shavings.
A girl who doesn’t cry and cry.”

All my impatience and frustration melted away.
“No, Punkin’, I want a little girl who plays in the sawdust.
I want a little girl who sometimes says ‘no’
And has to sit in a corner

I want a little girl who
Cries and pouts and laughs and sings
And this little girl who rides like the wind
I want YOU, beautiful girl

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 Reviews of "Perfect Girl"
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
This is beautiful! What wonderful things she said to this little girl -- it melted my heart!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 7, 2007
Gosh Karen ... I didn't even know you were on this site. How cool!

Your poem is laced with doting and loving sentiments. It blessed me. It is always best to sort through the mess and find what is most important. Can't go wrong when we pursue that.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
This is very sweet and tender poem.
Children are the future of our world and in the eyes
Of a mother our children are always perfect and beautiful
Angels from love!!
Beautiful write and great choice of words and flow!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
Oh so sweet
children tend to do that
change our moods and minds
loved this write......
pure

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Heart warming write, M'Lady. I read your intro page...I am very much impressed. I wish you many wonderful things, as your talents are far reaching and to be admired.

Jim

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Wonderfully penned, Karen, and I love that last line.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Very sweet

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Loving thoughts that come from the heart of a loving mom. Thank you for sharing, Karen. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Beautiful sentiments!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Karen,

A beautiful story and sentiments. Perfection is in the eye of the beholder.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Ah the saw dust pile, I too recall playing in this fun, but itchy stuff. Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
This is such a perfect capture of a mother's shared magic moment. Anyway who can read this without at least one ahhhh must be cold.

Love it

Fee

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
This puts into perspective what is perfect and full of joy and energy. Out of sawdust comes a little cracker barrel here, full of p, salt, and vinegar, Karen...

Sage

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on January 2, 2007
So much truth in here. I love this type of story. I have had (and seen) many such parallel situations in my life. -- Jeff


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