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Dark Victory
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“The Boy Scouts of America provides
a program for young people that builds character, trains them in the responsibilities of participating citizenship, and develops personal fitness.”


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Dark Victory

 

He was an Arabian, a noble and ancient breed of horse,

Twelve years old, in the prime of his life,

But one wouldn’t know it to look at him.

He was just another pathetic equine,

At an auction along with a dozen or so others.

 

His coat was a dull black, except for the white scars,

Where an ill-fitting saddle had cut into his flesh.

His ribs and hipbones were clearly visible,

But his eyes held a glimmer of hope.

 

He had hope that he would receive fair treatment,

Hope for a full sized meal and for kindness.

He had hope for some happy and for shade in the sun,

And for grass, and carrots and love.

 

His hope was rewarded; He will have a forever home.

He is honest and kind, in spite of ill treatment,

He never makes a wrong move.

His owner a man of seventy-five years,

Is kind and gentle (and always has a carrot in his pocket)

 

 

The sale was by the local Boy Scout chapter,

Whose values are quoted above.

I am appalled that the boys associated with these horses,

Were subject to such a poor example and education,

Shame on the leaders responsible for this neglect.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Dark Victory"
Reviewed on July 21, 2009
This is such a wonderful tribute to a great horse. I cried and I'm so glad he got a good home and someone to love him.

Reviewed on July 21, 2009
good rant Karen, the glue factory awaits though, I don't use lick stamps, it's self adhesive for me, hugs

Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
So sad but so true. There are far to many animals neglected because someone just gets tired of them. May God Bless You.
Daniel

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
Knowing your love of horses this write is especially caring for it has such a happy ending. From reading your book I learned so much of the way horses are treated and I know how deeply you feel on this subject. well written and well done...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
Thank you for sharing this apt and timely write, Karen. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
So good to hear that Dark Victory, finally had a good victory!
Lovely poem about one of my favorite creatures. I just love and admire horses. Nicely written Karen.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
I'm gald the horse was able to get an owner who will love and cherish him. They recently found some abandoned horses in another county and have them up for adoption...Great write Karen...M

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
Thank God for compassionate people like that 75 year old God send.

Reviewed on July 20, 2009
Amen! I've seen the horses in riding camps, and they get all sorts of treatment, because their owner is 'by the day,' or 'by the hour.' I'm very happy that this one found a good home for his latter days.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
sad read

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
On America's early years, long before vikings and pilgrims, man and horse were like one, both free, both depending on each other.
Whatever happened to make man the brutal creature of today?

Georg



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