As Any Poetry Is Open For Discussion IsDebatable !
__I Call Photo The River To Heaven___
Between These Two Portal's Lies Ignorance, Lies
(Those Not) Arrogance, Who Chose Road To (God),
___Heaven, Not To Satan's Holy Hell...
Beauty Of Poet's . Authorsden Is Discernable Of
The Mind Not Of The Physical Word's Of
Or Not To Be (Nerd) Heard, But Of The Mind___
If You Write Just To Say Something, Anything, Your
Just An Idiot, As Poet's Who Know It Don' Have For
To Show It___
Word's They Just From (Within) The Mind___
Now I Really Have You Thinking__What I've Read Of
Most Who Write Poetry Here; It Is As How Of
The Mind It Comes, True, It Doesn't Fit Your Mind__
It Just Does Not Simply Appeal To You___You May
Glance . It Or You May Comment On It, But, Say
It As You Are Not An Asshole Who Think's___
You Won't Lash Out . It Even Tho You May
Criticize It, You Speak Intelligently Not With As Say
An IQ Of (1) One___Come
If I Looked . Color, Race, People As A Point Of
With Out Discernable ___ I'd Be Another JJ Of
Little or Nothing To Say Running Off . The Mouth_
So Life Is Short, Most Will Never see It Coming As
Near The End __ I'll Still See What Few Friend's As
Dear To Me In Mind, " Thought's Entwined ", They
All Are White, Black, Brown, Blue,Greens,NoDismay
Only Good Soul's I'd Met along Way Path Of Life___
___Who All In Same In Pain Bared It In Poetry...
TRASK c 1979/2002 TRASK
Etal: And, You Won't Be In My Face,
____You Will Be In My Place With (God),
____Not In Satan's Holy Hell...
We All Forlorn Hope,We Are Echoed Thru Wall's Of
Time, The Good Within Those Few (Not Of Sin) Of
(God) Grace Not Race___
You Comes Out In Your Poetry___
Even Before In Those Eyes Of The Blind,
Even Those Blind Can Read Between Those (Kind)
Lines, Even (See) Those Slime....
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Reviews of "As Poetry Comes In Even Prose, Those, Grows, More Common Than You Think - Huh - Debatable..."
trask,
the power in a message is only as poignant as the messenger. you have a unique style and a powerful voice. your fearlessness to voice your convictions is highly respected by this author.
i consider you brother, and friend.
God bless &
hugs always
krissy
Another wonderful message. This has your same power, and at the same time a softness.
You are an incredible voice.
Thank you for your note!
*S*
~Jen
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2002
Interesting reply regarding the last poem you wrote. :) Nice write Trask and yes, I do agree, you intelligently "criticize" the work if you find faults with it rather than blurting crap ;)
This combined narrative dialogue and play is about the uncreated, unborn and undying transcendent Self of God-consciousness and Buddha-nature. It describes an odyssey of transcendent Consciousness Awakening and Remembrance.
This book chronicles an infinite allegoric odyssey of Absolute Awakening in which a learned man, a mute man, and a recluse woman are the principal players. The mute and the recluse are the learned one's Teachers and Guides on his journey of Enlighten
the power in a message is only as poignant as the messenger. you have a unique style and a powerful voice. your fearlessness to voice your convictions is highly respected by this author.
i consider you brother, and friend.
God bless &
hugs always
krissy
You are an incredible voice.
Thank you for your note!
*S*
~Jen
luva ya
Gina
Sandie Angel :o)