SLAMMING__ This Artilcle Somehow Disappeared From Authorsden Under " Literary Criticism " Then Lady Ava Knocked Me,(Typos) Who Made Typo's In Her Response To Me,i.e. Gee Ava You Made a Typo,You Don't Know How To Spell....
Review(s) Also Deleted__Here's Again Those Whom Asked...
11-08-01 8:30pm ( 2nd Printing)
___Literary Criticism...
If You Have Less Than Nothing To Say,
Then Don't Say Anything All...
If You Can't Say Something Kind,
Then Don't Say Anything At All...
If You Think You Know It All,
You Don't Know Anything...
If You Think You Are a Critic,
Then Criticize Yourself, and, If
You Are Just a___ " Visitor "___
Don't Tell An Author, Anybody They Don't
Know How To Spell -- Mind Your Manners !
Better Yet Mind Your Own (God) Damned
Business, Because You Have Less
Than Nothing To Say, Don't Say
Anything At All...
(9-07-01 Original Copy)
TRASK c 1979/2002 TRASK
From Out Of The Mouthes Of (Evil) Satan's ( Little Children) Demon's Comes 3rd Grade Mentality,( Slime) Arrogance...
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if God was to comment, i wonder what He would say to all the bickering?
i was put in my place by my wise grandfather, once...as i was arrogant about the church i had become affiliated. "no one else was going to heaven, cept us'ns"
any way....one day he and i were in a heated discussion about doctrine and dogma...he finally put a close on the conversation and asked me to take him to the market. mind you, at the time i lived out in the middle of the mojave desert. on our way back, my grandfather asked me if we could take a short cut...so i cut down another dirt path leading to my back door. he asked me how many ways there were to get to my house..i counted off atleast a half dozen..his reply taught me the true and enless meaning of humility...."Krissy, do you not think that our Father in heaven has prepared us in the same way...there are many roads that lead to his house...some are bumpy..some are clouded...some are straight and narrow...but as long as we have His home (our home) in our sights...we'll get there". Our common ground, is belief in Him..
hugs and love
krissy
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2002
This is too funny I did not read this piece until just now I think you would be amused also if you read my comment I left on Krisie's poem defending Trask.
check it out and you will see what I mean
In the mean please keep writing I like your style!!!!
Ed
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2002
The TRASKS of the world are Underdog Hero's and Heroetes. Who's picking on my friend?
out of the mouths of babes come truths that makes adults pale ! but truth is truth! discussions of free press will continue forever if we know whats good for us. u stirred up the pot with this write Trask!!
I don't really know what your problem is. I have tried to be patient with you and to understand you but to no avail. I will leave you in your hatred and name calling and accusations. But I am praying for you. Maybe someday you will begin to be tolerant to children of light. Maybe someday you will see the light.
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Josie
as an adult i was taught to speak my truth..
it gets confusing...but either way i am polite.....
debby
<heheh>
Sorry...couldn't resist. TRASK, I treasure your contributions, but hang on to thy temper and turn thy cheek... (don't know which one)
Gina, shaking head and laughing just a little
i was put in my place by my wise grandfather, once...as i was arrogant about the church i had become affiliated. "no one else was going to heaven, cept us'ns"
any way....one day he and i were in a heated discussion about doctrine and dogma...he finally put a close on the conversation and asked me to take him to the market. mind you, at the time i lived out in the middle of the mojave desert. on our way back, my grandfather asked me if we could take a short cut...so i cut down another dirt path leading to my back door. he asked me how many ways there were to get to my house..i counted off atleast a half dozen..his reply taught me the true and enless meaning of humility...."Krissy, do you not think that our Father in heaven has prepared us in the same way...there are many roads that lead to his house...some are bumpy..some are clouded...some are straight and narrow...but as long as we have His home (our home) in our sights...we'll get there". Our common ground, is belief in Him..
hugs and love
krissy
check it out and you will see what I mean
In the mean please keep writing I like your style!!!!
Ed
-smirk-
but really you've done it again!!!