I am so proud of my sister, you see
God knew what he was doing
when He gave her to me
and I to her...
I watched in an adolescent satisfaction we were both eleven she traced the alphabet in her foggiest precipitation as we drove back home...
Later I found out, once we could communicate, she thought our motor home was our only locate So many eyes stared at her face Her eyes were so different, of Asian race...
She spoke little in English I knew nothing of Korean Mom put us together, our shared bedroom being...
That very first night, we stayed up so late making animal noises, from pictures off pate Our laugh, our smiles, all facile expressions It was all we needed, in bonding, our sister sensations!
I taught her the bad words first so did she...me Why is it these words always grab a child’s intrigue?
She was an artist, a math wizard too! I was a writer, even back then, teaching her the simplest, funniest words that I penned...
Mom named her Patricia, although, she only knew HaeYung, My name is Kim, and all thought it was funny "Shouldn’t it be the other way around?", Dad asked Mommy
School was very hard for her at first but within only months, she surpassed us with thirst A exemplearary student, from me being the worst...
I went on...my wayward times She stayed behind, hoping I’d find whatever I was looking for but I didn’t, and returned...
Shortly after, she went off to college I missed her smile, but I knew her knowledge must be taking the tests And then finally she came back Dr. Patricia Van Kooten, D.M.D. , the dentist!
Now we are grown, married mothers we are... I live here and she lives so far I think back on the short time we shared Thanking the Lord, the opportunities, paired
I am so proud of my sister, you see God knew what he was doing when He gave her to me and I to her...and I miss her too!
Thank You Lord, for my sister... Patricia
Copyright 2006 Kimmy Van Kooten
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Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Awesome display of affection. I hope she reads this!! After all, she traveled the world to get to YOU, that sister, Patricia.
~Tamara Patricia Perlin
Mrs Kim! lol. When I was in Taegu, South Korea, that was the last name of almost 80% of the population there. How ironic. Your heart is absolutely huge. It's quite apparent in your poetry. You are truly blessed and keep being the wonderful person that you are. Thanks. Jim
Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
Nice poem for Patty. I hope she knows what a great sister you are.
Chrissy
What a touchingly beautiful write...I hope she will see this. God Bless
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2006
Kimmy a beautiful sisterly tribute to patricia both of you in the picture is so darling......... Thank you for this poetic poets reflection I love knowing more about you.
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Chrissy
Chrissy
Blessings,
Joselyn
Hugs Angela
Love,
CJ
love Tinka
For this wonderful tribute to your sister
you just shared with us,
An excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Beautiful "Sister Sensations" in poetic grandiose in this prose-poem.
I have enjoyed the reading of ""Sister Sensations"".
In reverent admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
thanks for letting us take a view into your world...
Susan