ET,
Sorrowful feelings when I read this, but so well written (and all in LOWERCASE) which I love to see. This refreshed me and makes me ponder my own life's future.
This has shades of IRIS innit, ( Judy Dench) hmmm, in any case its a keeper.
We reap what we sow in this life for sure.
Do not take any notice of that person below telling you how to spell LOLOL. You can spell colour any way you want ROFL.
You are my favourite writer Queen. No one writes like you do.
Love n hugs
Ch'erie
PS I went up into the High Country and I havent come down... well not in my head at least :)
EXcellence, Eileen, both at the top of our respective poetry meter having made it tonight, you never know how these things are going to fly! Even with graphic, is the audience going to decipher?? I did! I have arrived, knowing how I did get here...faith, spiritualism, and goddess prayer...Blessed Be.
sad how when one detaches from all that matters to them, they have a difficult time understanding the ramifications of losing all until its too late ... nicely penned, moving poem ...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
Would be sad to die alone..
those who can't love others usually
wind up this way.
Fine write...
x0x0x0x0x
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
Darn, I thought you were gunna inflict more pain on the naughty French.
Indeed a very poignant penn...Hey, you said film, not movie, yay yay yay, be spelling coloUr next.
What was the film? Sound bit like Wings of a Dove....
We reap what we sow. I think nothing is more important than stopping to help someone. Even if you are alone at the end, you will be fullfilled. Good poets write their obsevations. Yours are keen.
E.T., this is sad but oh so true...you get back in this life what you have given. I've seen this happen in many peoples lives, but yet, when they are alone they blame it on everyone else but themselves. You've expressed this in a great poem.
Such a powerful and sad write my friend, but all too often there are people all across the world who live this same kind of life, must be lonely! You've captured it well with this offering!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Powerful message very sad but many
Times this has been known to happens
As the saying goes you made your bed lay on it!
Outstanding message withing this write!!
Love and Peace to you always..Morning Star
We certainly do reap what we sow in this life Sugar Chum, and it always comes in due season. This exceptional poem, with the undergirding image, is quite indicative of that reality. Well done!
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard
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Sorrowful feelings when I read this, but so well written (and all in LOWERCASE) which I love to see. This refreshed me and makes me ponder my own life's future.
Thanks,
George
We reap what we sow in this life for sure.
Do not take any notice of that person below telling you how to spell LOLOL. You can spell colour any way you want ROFL.
You are my favourite writer Queen. No one writes like you do.
Love n hugs
Ch'erie
PS I went up into the High Country and I havent come down... well not in my head at least :)
Be safe,
Karen
Warmly and in Kindred Spirit,
Sage
those who can't love others usually
wind up this way.
Fine write...
x0x0x0x0x
Indeed a very poignant penn...Hey, you said film, not movie, yay yay yay, be spelling coloUr next.
What was the film? Sound bit like Wings of a Dove....
Ron
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Times this has been known to happens
As the saying goes you made your bed lay on it!
Outstanding message withing this write!!
Love and Peace to you always..Morning Star
Thank you Eileen.
Jibril
Awesome
Love Tinka
Thanks,
Dan
of life a wicked brew"
Poignant and sharp wisdom my friend. Beautiful poetry.
Peace,
Bill
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard
With a perfect picture
The choices we make
Are sometimes hard to take.
DWB
good write
j+
Definately haunting and poignant verse, excellently expressed: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)