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Moody Mountains
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Traveling in the mountains
on a long and cryptic road
Needing to shed the baggage
of a much too heavy load


Twists and turns jolt the mind
Keeping all senses alert
Incline/decline not too kind
knots in the stomach hurt


Meeting challenges head on
Seeking the right connection
Courage for the marathon
Fearing not the direction


The answer  worth looking for
Is how to balance the flow
Of one thing I can be sure
Wrong relationships must go


Some people have a mind set
With them you cannot reason
You try to make adjustment
But there is  no cohesion


Back off from all resentment
Do not wait til you implode
Claim your right to contentment
Now approach a smoother road!


etw


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 Reviews of "Moody Mountains"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 6, 2010
AH, THOSE MOUNTAINS....I TELL YOU...THE ONLY THING YOU CAN DO WITH THEM IS TO 'CLIMB' THEM! THANKS FOR THIS GREAT METAPHORIC WORK...WELL DONE. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Well said

Walt

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
Well said. Many applause for you this morning and one bow. This is a lesson I taught my children, more so my daughters and step daughters a year or so back when I left their father for the same reasons. wonderful write. Lady J

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
That's a winner in my book Sis! We are our very own pilots. A lot of time we spend flying in the wrong direction. Fearless thinking can always give a defferent meaning to our paths if we dare take a different direction. I love this!
Susan

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
An excellent write Eileen
Enjoyed much

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I've been on those bumpy, curvy, dangerous roads.
I know life is a rough ride and you're so right one
must "back off from all resentments and claim your
right to contentment...Now approach a smoother road"
Eileen this says a lot in the way you look at life, your
sprituality.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I enjoyed this one Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Wonderful advice and write.

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Beautiful write, Eileen; love the pic! BRAVA!

Happy July Fourth to you; stay safe and have fun!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Beautiful inspiration from moody mountains, Eileen, thought provoking excellence. Well done!

(((HUGS))), love and Happy (Safe) 4th, Karla.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
E.T., life is like a relationship, if the relationship is not a good one then; we should hang them up, and if life's relationship with one's self is causing havoc; then, we should make a change in the way we live. You've written a great poem of great advice and I enjoyed it much!

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I have many mountains but not white
Beautiful write relationships are like some roads
Very bumpy and many curves but yes get out of that kind
of road and approach a smoother Road!
Excellent your words captured a beautiful imagery and flow
Outstanding message within this write my friend!!
Love Peace and Joy to you always....Yolie

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
You must have a good map to travel that perilious road. Let all our roads be smoother.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
a wonderful analogie-i have "white knuckled" a few of those mountain roads myself as well as life's roads-you have done a good job -

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
As someone who has driven on all sorts of roads I have to admit your description of this one has me wishing to drive on it...ed

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Eileen,
Beautiful pic and poem! Excellent advice we all should read!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
enjoyed the read, lovely graphic, words well done

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Twirling roads, rocks suddenly sliding your way, rain making all slippery, ice clumping on the windshield, bugs coming at you like small comets, low sun getting on your eyes, thunder tap dancing down the mountain sides.......but that's just life with all its problems.
We should buckle-up and enjoy the drive while doing it not in a recklessly manner but taking all in, the good with the bad and maybe then...we learn something else.
The poem started me going...very well done ET
Georg
Georg

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Less wear and tear when you choose a road that is paved and is smooth.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
A Cracka of a write here :)
( pardon that despicable pun plzzze)
One cannot live without sense or reason!
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
reads like good advise

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Great mind-adjuster...let the asphalt lead the way...properly inflated 35 psi, clean windshield, fresh air blows out the cobs...Have a safe and happy July 4th Den Mother...

Love,

Sage


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