Some that eclipse the mind Put one in a bind When covert moon makes Their spirit to wake Although obfuscation Denies elation The senses still could feel All that was real
Exposed ideology densely denied Earths matter implied Truth suppressed in outward fashion Sham belies the real passion To some, relationships once bidden All must remain hidden This type masqurade of thought Shows methods taught
I'd rather have the light of day Than cryptic as the chosen way
Very interesting how your words no one write
I think I agreed with Barbara and
I guess you did mess with my mind
With this mysterious write!!
Excellent write it's giving me something to ponder
For a while!!
Hugssss Love Peace and Joy to you always....Yolie
Eileen, yes tell me what you think...don't say something different to someone else because when someone talks out both sides of their mouth it's sickening. I thought this to be profound & prolific! I also enjoyed the graphic images also. Good Write!!!
This brings a huge smile to my face, Eileen! :)) No one can mess with YOUR mind, that's for sure as, along with the others, I try to massage my feeble brain round the meaning of your words... until my slowness catches up to the fact that THAT'S just the point! Have to say I'm just a sucker for both... the clear AND the opaque... Seems to me my mind has difficulty NOT wandering uphill and downdale in the deciphering and "playing with" all the possibilities of both. Like a dolphin with a ball, I guess... Here, catch...!! :)) Love this, Kate xx
PS... keep seeing a foetus in your picture... which, I guess, is one of the most beautiful "hidden" mysteries that my small mind, for one, has never been able to fathom... xx
Quite the pholosipher today, aren we, Eileen. Yes, you are, I will answer that foolish question. A lost said in a condensed venue . . . Attaboygirl . . .
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
You have obfuscated my mind, but that could be my fault...what with the heat and the wine....Victor
I think there's a plea for directness in this poem which is commendable; so much writing is obscure and dense (although that can be a pleasure for many).
I prefer those who are open and honest also, Eileen, it just makes it so much easier to understand them and also to befriend them. Cryptic thinkers or speakers leave us wondering if there is any honesty or truth in their words or actions. Kind of a different write for you, Eileen, but very nicely presented...great graphic also!!
Take care,
Sherry
This book presents a narrative story of one person's journey of transcendental Awakening and Enlightenment as guided by his two Sage companions. It is grounded in Zen Buddhist and Taoist perspective and uses the I Ching as its structural framework. T
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
Love Tinka
Blessings,
Josie
I think I agreed with Barbara and
I guess you did mess with my mind
With this mysterious write!!
Excellent write it's giving me something to ponder
For a while!!
Hugssss Love Peace and Joy to you always....Yolie
George
Be safe,
Karen
PS... keep seeing a foetus in your picture... which, I guess, is one of the most beautiful "hidden" mysteries that my small mind, for one, has never been able to fathom... xx
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rose
Walt
enjoyable write
Peace be with you
William
Love & Peace
Elizabeth
Take care,
Sherry