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One Theme using different styles-Den Challenge
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 One theme using  different styles

Senryu-5-7-5
Cinquain-2-4-6-8-2
Tanka -5-7-5-7-7
Englyn-7 syllable- triplet rhyme
Finish with  Senryu-


~^**^~

When I first met you
I felt like lightning struck me
I could barely talk



I hoped
I didn't blush
You held my eyes captive
I was looking into your soul
With joy



When we met again
You asked me out to dinner
Of course I said yes
I was aware of nothing
But the way you made me feel



We spoke softly as we ate
Being this was our first date
I hoped I would act sedate


We lingered over dessert
Giving us more time to flirt
your hand slipped under my skirt


I didn't like your slick move
Wanting to set a quick groove
Sorry I did not approve


We parted in a nice way
You didn't have much to say
Tomorrow is another day


Though I felt regret
I won't muddle over it
Lightning can strike twice


ET-2008

William Bonilla suggested I


make this a den challenge, so go to it


whoever wants to, should be fun!;-)

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "One Theme using different styles-Den Challenge"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
interesting, i like this

Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Oh, Girl!! You did so good with these...proud of you (but I always knew you could do whatever you set your mind to :o). Love 'em.

Micke
(who's slowly but surely reading here more, and finally commenting on some. One day... :o)

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
I loved this!!!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Oh Yeah, too true.
Excllnt write, with a touch of Nonchalance.

I may try my hand at the challenge, C how I go :):)

Hugszzzzzz
Ch'erie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
creative and well developed montage of genre ... captures the moment nicely ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
Most Interesting! And you just never know where lightning may strike next.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
how clever. it's neat, truly. cheers

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Delightful humor in a difficult form.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I love the beauty of the story and the different poetic styles. I've given it a try. Not an easy task.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
A splendid write with a touch of humor, very unique Eileen...I think I will play around with this challenge and see what I come up with...

love, Carole~

Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Love this POEM Eileen
but not my style of poetry to write!
I have a hard time understanding it!
Glad you listened to your heart! What a sly move! and just meeting! hmmm...
WEll done and I hope many go for it!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Supurbly done! I took the challenge, so far out of my league. LOL

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I'll pass on the challenge,nice write,the old hand up the skirt trick huh......that changed the tempo for sure,
stan

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I'll take one! (challenge that is, not drink) **smiles**
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
When she left my glass was already empty,
but I didn't cry on it for her absence then,
because she had filled my heart with inebriating
wine so full of promises, not maybe...but when.

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
another excellent write Eileen, there is plenty of fish in the sea. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Eileen,

That was excellent. I don't know if I could do it and still have it make sense. (lol)Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
...your story told...with many different styles of pen...your story told well.
this is great Eileen...
John

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
way too disciplined for me :) the poetry challenge I mean :)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Words of wisdom so delicately stated, yes sometimes lightning does strike twice....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
the sun will come up tomorrow,,,,enjoyed your creative touch!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Tis' no challenge for me, I know I can't do it...but it sounds fun...ed

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
OMG!!!!! Eileen, this was EXCELLENT!!!!! You gotta love this!!!!!

Sandie May :o)


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Damnit, why didn't I think of this, but then, even if I had I could never have come up with such a perfect vehicle to move the poem as you did here . . . I like your ability to "tell a story," as you know by now, poetry need not be so lofty that you can't understand it, and this one most definitely told a story and it was told excellently . . . Give us some more when you feel up to it . . .

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Eileen, this is absolutely great!! I got a big laugh out of it...you did a great job on this write. This is a real keeper.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Smooth as silk, loved it Eileen
You are one creative woman
Thank you for this masterpiece
You should make this Jewel into a Den Challenge
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Good on ya girlfriend.

Walt

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
i like the integration of styles in this--also enjoyed your spunk!

Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Indeed, Eileen, lightning can strike twice. :) Beautiful pairings of a common theme. Well done!

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Wonderful!
With love
Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
You tickled my funny bone with this delightful set of poetry. if at first you don't succeed...

Reviewed on January 17, 2008
I love it, Eileen; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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