E.T Obit-J Allen challange (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Of course we have all heard the story of the hypochondriac whose tombstone read....."See, I told you I was sick."

Walt

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Immortal man never dies, just leaves an old shell, as we are always outside time, immortality does not begin at death, there is no death as we are living in immortality now....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Different but well done!!

The picture reminded me of "spooky"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

May the winds of change bring Creator's
wisdom to a dying world

I wouldn't mind that on my own tombstone, Tiger Lily. It's very, very good, and quite thought provoking.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

ET called home, they answered, she has left the earth building.

Georg

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Clever and different! An aunt of mine chose her coffin and planned her complete funeral while she was living.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

a cool take on the challenge-i enjoyed it very much

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

And she did leave behind many writers that did respect her talent & compassion...e

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

I love the way you placed each word and paused to let us think.

I'll be happy when we all get this test over. It's eerie to me but....a wide open look at our own paths.

Love and blessings.
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

"May the winds of change bring Creator's
wisdom to a dying world" Wow Awesome Words Eileen, great job.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Can I borrow the second verse for mine Eileen, especially the temptation part, how on earth did you manage, and I think you are right on the last one, they are blowing up a storm, it's a nice gesture, but still no one is listening! Rest in Peace my friend, till we go dancing on the other side! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Beautiful writing Eileen
My favor your ending stanza
Wisdom for dying world
Very powerful!
Brilliant write!!
peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

May the winds of change bring Creator's
wisdom to a dying world
That would be a great one Eileen
Ron

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

....exceptionally finally breathed; seems almost oracular. ..
blessings~
ness

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Great writing sweet lady,well done...HUgsss

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

A beautiful tribute to ones eternity.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Excellent response to J. Allen's challenge; well penned, Eileen! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

A unique and stimulating perception to ponder. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Good. Took it to where you needed to go . . . I won't play this game . . . I had many obits already written for me . . . Remember . . .

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Eileen, a powerful profound write...I do believe you've met yours and Allen's challenge. Excellent obituary!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Wow, what a challenge! You've expressed
sentiments that I too feel are important.
Those we leave behind need our wisdom
and perhaps we can change our world?

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Eileen,

Challenge offerred, met and exceeded--you do make a difference with your words! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Powerful but have come to expect no less from your mighty pen.