Strange how when we are young, we don't think about growing old until one day we realize gosh we are getting up there, where did the time go and it keeps going by faster and faster. A day doesn't have 24 hours anymore and a week doesn't have 7 days and a year doesn't contain the 12 months we were use to. A lot of us realize what we have we want to hold on to because there isn't enough time to screw up. It is with age we see we have been blessed. Unfortunately we know the day will come when we will be like that tree, Bent & broken will be our heart. I do pray that I will have many, many years before I am faced with this, I am not looking forward to looking like that tree anytime soon.
Bent & broken as my Heart
I sit alone in a wide open field,
Thinking of what I must do.
For so many years I have given my all,
To my only sweetheart dear you.
Sadness have filled my eyes with tears,
Separated we had no choice but to part. I sit all alone in a wide open field,
By this tree, bent & broken as my heart.
Age is showing all the signs;
It’s toren us after years far apart.
Again I sit here & look at this tree,
With age bent & broken as my heart.
This tree we once sat under,
As we gazed at the stars above,
Now I look at the home you have chosen,
As I sit here without you my love.
It became our special meeting place,
When our folks denied us our love.
We would meet under the tree in secretcy, We would gaze at the Heavens above.
I look at the branches above me,
I remember the strength they once had,
When you & I were young lovers,
We never thought we could ever be sad.
Today the branches are withered & torn;
They are broken and bent to the ground.
No more will theybrighten withlife,
For its age too has come around.
Rose, we should have been born as a oak, they tell me that those trees will be here forever, getting more beautiful with the years, and no wind will dare to broke one of its branches.
This poem touched my heart in many ways. When we're young , we don't think about becomming old. As our hair turns to silver and wrinkels appear, our time on earth grows shorter .. You poem has captured it all! WELL DONE!.....M
Rose this poem could easily be a song
its funny how a tree life can reflect
Sadness and grow old have a broken heart
the same as humans
in many ways trees feelings and life
Represents the human life!
I love the tone the flow and emotions
Your words captured in this
Beautiful write!!
Keep that flow!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning star
Hello Rose,
Your write is beautiful and takes me down memory lane, and yes how sad my heart felt for the 2, and the tree full of lovers memories also.
Loving Write
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
My God Rose, this just has to be up there as one of your best! All the raw emotion that we all feel and face, then put aside for another day. Trying to hold on to what once was and is no more. I was divorced many years ago when there were pre-school children to take care of. In my later years I met and married Robert and for now the void has been filled. God bless and keep you strong dear lady....
Ohhh, This brings TEARS just seeing the pict. I'm such a tree hugger/lover Rose! I can feel their spirits! and I write TREE poems too! Rose, I had no idea - You and hubby are apart! This isn't tempor.? Oh god, my heart goes out to you - it really does! This stinks to go through this - I know, I've been there so long ago, with 19yrs and I married him 2X.s- WE actually Divorced!
Any way, this poem was so expressive as your heart shares~! Getting old isn't easy, but we have no control - STay STrong and Positive!
WRITE ON!
Warm hugs and Spiritual Love, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo
P.s. This is a gem of a treasure and I am keeping to savor! Thank you for writing this! :)
I agree with LIana on this one, it is one of yur very best Rose without a doubt in my mind. I loved and enjoyed each verse. Bravo dear cuz.
down home hugs
Fee
This is one of the beast POEMS from YOUR work!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful, very romantic, very sad and very talented!!!!!!!!!!!!! Every word in this poem is heavenly beautiful, they all penetrate very deep my heart!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Time moves so fast and how true, we dont realize it until we are much older. A brilliant write full of truth and some sadness that we all will experience one day.
Yes, well thoughtout and with full feelings of what it is to be losing time at a faster rate. It's scary at times and at others the memories just flood over me. Excellent write. Liz
Hi Rose,all of us will have to get old one way or the other and like someone said time has no mercy for anyone.This is a deep poem about how we should always cherish the days that we have on this earth and that growing old is a part of life.You share a lot of wisedom in this poem which is appreciated.take care
Rose, this actually brought tears to my eyes because many days I fill just like you have written this. Time has "no" mercy for any of us...it only robs us of our youth.What a fabulous job you did on this one, well stated and spoken in truth.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Georg
I'm afraid I feel like that old tree. *OW* LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
its funny how a tree life can reflect
Sadness and grow old have a broken heart
the same as humans
in many ways trees feelings and life
Represents the human life!
I love the tone the flow and emotions
Your words captured in this
Beautiful write!!
Keep that flow!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning star
Your write is beautiful and takes me down memory lane, and yes how sad my heart felt for the 2, and the tree full of lovers memories also.
Loving Write
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Be always safe,
Karen
Any way, this poem was so expressive as your heart shares~! Getting old isn't easy, but we have no control - STay STrong and Positive!
WRITE ON!
Warm hugs and Spiritual Love, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo
P.s. This is a gem of a treasure and I am keeping to savor! Thank you for writing this! :)
down home hugs
Fee
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Edwin
Larry