Where Are You
October 13,2008
Written By: Rose Marie Rideout
Where are you?, I’ve missed you,
You’ve been away for so long it do seem.
So often I wake still wiping my tears,
From what I’ve vision in my dream.
I think it is time you stopped wandering,
It’s time you’ve come back home.
We can forgive and forget the past,
Please don’t leave me another day alone.
We all make mistakes in our life,
It is part of who we really are,
But we can get past all the hurt,
Move on without leaving a scar.
Love is a strong binding,
Meant to salvage mistakes we do,
Nothing can be so damaging
Mistakes were made by both me and you.
No one to blame, it just happened,
One lonely night, I know it isn’t fear,
Just one lonely night my darling,
We thought the other no longer cared.
Where are you tonight love?
Are you gazing up at that special star,
As I am staring up in the sky,
Wondering dear where you are.
Though my tears are washing the pain,
My heart is beating real bad,
As I lay here in this empty cold bed,
Feeling lost, lonely and sad.
Where are you? Won’t you please come home?
I’m feeling alone and blue.
My life can’t be complete dear,
If I have to live life without you.
CarolHawks
hugs
Kathy
How so very true, Rose.
Sometimes stumbling and falling doesn't give a chance of coming up and go on walking.
Sometimes all what is left is..."where are you?"
Georg
once again you express the feelings so many feel and can't or won't express. A lovely piece.
John
:)Christine
Powerfully penned regret ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Edwin
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Be always safe,
Karen
hugs
your cuz
Fee
My favorite lines are,
"Are you gazing up at that special star,
As I am staring up in the sky,
Wondering dear where you are."
Is that a question? The punctuation seems questionable. How DO you punctuate that correctly? It seems like a question and a statement. I don't really know how it is supposed to be.
Nice sentiment in the poem, though well covered already in pop culture, but still a good choice for AD. We are all still learning here, especially me Rose. --- Rockie
Rockie