A Conversation With Two hearts
Why did you break my heart into?
Because our love was never true .
I though your love was just for me.
I couldn’t give what wasn't free.
That look you gave so willingly.
I say again, it wasn’t meant to be.
We can forget she has your heart.
But my love for her cannot part.
I believed every word you had to say.
That’s how a man gets his own way..
But you cheated & openly lied to her face.
But weakness at your sight made my heart race.
How could you hurt a love so strong?
You & I never did belong.
So now you’ll leave me here to shed a tear.
Deep inside I just don’t care.
You think her love for you is true
It's a love that's given to only a few.
How will I know when love is true ?
When it’s the one that’s meant for you.
How can I freely open up my heart again?
When love comes from a true caring man.
I’ll fear that another will break my heart in two.
Not if it is a love that’s truly meant for you.
I’m sorry that I hurt you so, I mean that from my heart.
Then I guess it’s best as friends,that we now part.
hugs
Kathy
Rose you spoke the hearts of two, in confusion but steeped in love so well, Or so to speak!
I would rather know the truth than be lead around in pain, lies and fantasy!
I love the way you decided to darken and lighten the sentences and the style in which you chose too!
Unique poem felt strongly!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings of Love, Light and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoo
P.S. I can feel the poem from Sweet Fee, that stroked your pen in this direction! Ahhh
rather than destroy me with a lie...so letting go of false love is better than holding the daggars of it's lie
No-one deserse to hold the arms of another who does not love
this is a wonderful poem you have penned Rose
there is wonderful messages of insight inside
"A Conversation With two hearts" no matter if he sounds abrasive, he is honest...and that's a good thing
Much Love & Inspirations Always
Vickie
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Regis
difficulty in trying to make sense of them all. Excellent poem!
Love,
Eileen
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece
Love & peace be with you
William
A sharp and worthwhile look at love in all its glory and all its pain.
Thank you for this.
John
hugs
fee
nice work...
Art Sun...
love,
Christine
Rose, that hearts should wear boxing gloves and make it right!
Georg
Edwin
Be always safe,
Karen
Lack of communication in these lines: he said, she said, that kind of thing ... but the ending gives hope that two hearts can beat as one. Effectively penned, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D