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A Conversation With two hearts
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After reading a poem written by Fee the other day my fingers led me to this one. Hope it makes some kind of since. It is one person asking why and the other trying to answer.


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A Conversation With Two hearts

 

Why did you break my heart into?
Because our love was never true .

I though your love was just for me.
I couldn’t give what wasn't free.

That look you gave so willingly.
I say again, it wasn’t meant to be.

We can forget she has your heart.
But my love for her cannot part.

I believed every word you had to say.
That’s how a man gets his own way..

But you cheated & openly lied to her face.
But weakness at your sight made my heart race.

How could you hurt a love so strong?

You & I never did belong.

So now you’ll leave me here to shed a tear.
Deep inside I just don’t care.


You think her love for you is true

It's a love that's given to only a few.

How will I know when love is true ?
When it’s the one that’s meant for you.

How can I freely open up my heart again?
When love comes from a true caring man.

I’ll fear that another will break my heart in two.
Not if it is a love that’s truly  meant for you.

I’m sorry that I hurt you so, I mean that from my heart.
Then I guess it’s best as friends,that we now part.


 

 


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 Reviews of "A Conversation With two hearts"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on January 16, 2009
I lke the style of this write. the he and she parts. Well done
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on January 15, 2009
Sadly, too many will understand this having been the broken-hearted. It just hurts so badly when someone we trust and someone we 'think' loves us betrays us and that love was false. The pain can be unimaginable. Nicely captured emotion, Rose. Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed on January 11, 2009
PERFECT!
Rose you spoke the hearts of two, in confusion but steeped in love so well, Or so to speak!
I would rather know the truth than be lead around in pain, lies and fantasy!
I love the way you decided to darken and lighten the sentences and the style in which you chose too!
Unique poem felt strongly!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings of Love, Light and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoo
P.S. I can feel the poem from Sweet Fee, that stroked your pen in this direction! Ahhh

Reviewed on January 11, 2009
I say hurt me with the truth
rather than destroy me with a lie...so letting go of false love is better than holding the daggars of it's lie
No-one deserse to hold the arms of another who does not love
this is a wonderful poem you have penned Rose
there is wonderful messages of insight inside
"A Conversation With two hearts" no matter if he sounds abrasive, he is honest...and that's a good thing
Much Love & Inspirations Always
Vickie

Reviewed on January 10, 2009
Well done, I liked this alot, you expressed both emotions well
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 10, 2009
A unique way to show both sides of love.....M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Been there, done that; I can completely relate, Rose. Thank you. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Rose, you've shown the beauty and pain of love so well in this piece.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
A sad tale of lost love and endless new possibilities.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
Very nicely done Rose! You show the many faces of love and our
difficulty in trying to make sense of them all. Excellent poem!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
an excellent write Rose
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Rose,
A sharp and worthwhile look at love in all its glory and all its pain.
Thank you for this.
John

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Great job Rose... hearing both sides was refreshing... lindalaw

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Love the origianality of this one Cuz and the earnest talk between two hearts instead of two lovers. Love does come in many way, shapes and forms and often our hearts do not allow us to decide who we love or dont' love but when we love wrong, to have the wisdom to go on without hate and anger is what makes even those loves...sweet memories.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Nice poem Rose...relationships are truly a gift when the two involved truly commit to each other...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Sad to think of a hurtful heart...but it happens every day. Great write Rose.
love,
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
OMG! ! ! she can talk!
Rose, that hearts should wear boxing gloves and make it right!

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Cousin Fee has truly inspired you.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Rose,this is a unique and powerful poem that expresses love at its worst and at its best.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
This is a beauty Rose. Very well done my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
Rose it is a great poem, I hope it is not a real one. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
Sweet Rose, a gem of a write. People come together for many reasons, but only true love and respect will keep them together...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on January 6, 2009
Rose,

Lack of communication in these lines: he said, she said, that kind of thing ... but the ending gives hope that two hearts can beat as one. Effectively penned, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on January 6, 2009
Wonderful writing, Rose; always a joy to read/review you! You are one of my very favorites here; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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