Nothing Just The Emptiness (poem) by Rose M Rideout on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

A great write sis and oh so true. We listen to the younger generation complain about all the rules at home, but they overlook the love. Little do they know the pain of living on the street,
until they are in that situation and its so sad. Its sad that some of them learn it too late.

Love you sis,
Selena

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

WOW! What a hard "EASY flow" to read Rose!
Too many out there are sinking
as they still continue believing!
My I don't know what more to write, for WE had this problem to deal with just recently, and it turned out all right... but for many, it does not for one reason or another!
Their own stubborness usually stands strong, wish staying in their homes they could resolve.
What a sad reality of life!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

STay Positive! Through the warmth of inner serenity!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

an excellent write Rose
There are millions out there
In those mean streets
Sometimes I wondered what keeps the alive
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOLDEN WORDS, I LOVE EACH ONE OF THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS YOUR BEST POEM!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Rose,
A reality check for us all...and there but for fortune go...
Your heart powerful and rich as always.
John

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

"Nothing Just The Emptiness" is the depths of reality
heart stirring our sincerest compassions
for homelessness is a physical depravement & a psycological tragedy for the soul to endure....
Emotive Verses Rose
Peace, Love & Blessings
Vikcie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

tears...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

So very sad and moving, Rose. Much like Fee's piece, it touches my heart. This is something that should not be happening in my opinion. It is criminal. Excellent write, emotive and powerful! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Rose, I see these children of abuse all day long and I try to help the ones that have no home or family too. It is very hard to get them to trust you after they have been treated so badly by society. There are many spoiled children that have no idea what life is on the streets and how hard it is to live from day to day. An excellent write

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

...hopefully the 'now' is with strength and hope one would find their way..as you never know what the reasons are.. I agree with Georg that parents can be the problem... I will never forget a girl my daughter helped...she could not eat the food in her house or use electricity..had to have a candle in her room..abused and abused...soo sad, she went on her own,,it was tough..but now she is doing ok. truly sad!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

We all had that attitude but we stopped short of opening that door and walk away, that's called to cool off before doing something that we would regret...dearly!
But, in this world of communication and informations...how can they? How can think that walking out in the big bad world where dog eats dog they will be better? Perhaps the parents need to regroup and see if "they" are the ones with unreasonable condition.
Just a thought.

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

In the sadness that you write of Rose, there is hope. And that hope makes this a beautiful poetic story my friend. This is absolutely wonderful. Thanks for sharing and God bless.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

It is truly unfortunate as once these kids are out on the street, there is a "pride" thing that keeps them from returning home, even though their parents, SOMETIMES, will welcome them with open arms...parents that do NOT welcome their children back into the fold, were never really parents in the first place...excellent subject matter & a great write to go along with it...Ed

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Sad and heartbreaking.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

Well done Rose and the only thing I might add is that there are almost as many kids out there who are not there through any fault of their own, sexual, physical, mental abuse in our society is rampant and to a lot of these kids it is there only means of survival...to escape to the streets.

Fee

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

What a sad situation! Teen years are the most rebellious years, but only if they knew who love them most they would not be lost. Some of them ended up being on drugs and then lose their lives on the street.

Sad indeed!

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

I hate this reality... but you covered it well.. nicely done.. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

Rose,

The bitter winds of loneliness permeate these heartwrenching lines. This shouldn't be. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

Heartbreaking reality; starkly penned sadness! Well done, Rose; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <