As Time Slowly Drifts By (poem) by Rose M Rideout on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 3, 2009

moving and well written ... enjoyed reading this moving poem ...

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

... but oh the thrill and anticipation of the Grand Reunion, Rose! :)) It's beautiful that you still have such an alive love for one another that counts the hours of absence so heavily. This must be what true "missing" is. Thank you for this feeling-write which puts me in your shoes. May the penning help to alleviate the pain and to pass the time... xx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Wonderful write, Rose; well done!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Poetry written form the heart.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

I hope the move is a good one for you Rose, enjoyed the poem. Things will settle down in time.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Your heart shines within these words sweet lady..keep smiling OK..stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Sad Rose but well said from the heart. Hang in there my friend. Just went through this myself as you know, except our move was forced. Take it from one who knows; it gets easier and actually better. And remember; God has His reasons.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Oh you sweet lady, your tears flow through the page, yet the best is yet to come. Patience and you will soon forget this pain when reunited with all the ones you love....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Selling the home so quickly was and is a fantastic blessing! Fred's new job is also a wonderful blessing! You my dear, staying behind your hubby is surely lonely; but....the reward will be so worth it. It's okay to cry...let it out; don't let it build and make you sick...stay connected thru emails and phone calls often...and when you do meet again...think how wonderful that will be for you both!!! Cool!!! In the meantime, visit your friends, and do those things that you may not be able to do once you are gone....This will be the time to value and know that even tho it seems like 3 mo's is eternity...it will pass quickly... I loved your poem as it expressed so much! Take care and know you are not alone...and Fee can't wait for you to hurry and get there either!!!! hehe... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Strange isn't it how separation can make 3 months seem like a million years. It's also true when it's over you'll wonder where the time went;-) Excellent poem...

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

What lovely heart you have, what a love-filled heart!!!

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

The crying is good Rose. I agree with what Georg said below. All the anticipation you're feeling will build into a wonderful reunion. One day soon you'll look around and all your dreams will have come true. Not many people achieve that. I admire you for going after yours.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

three months in exchanged for the next thirty years near your dear sweet cousin...that's me...lol. Fred is right the time will go by pretty quick.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

A moving pen, I can relate to being alone...
but your dreams are coming true... so you are blessed!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

We must count what we have....my, sounds like your dreams are becoming a reality....you are blessed Rose!
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

To cry is to release the tension building inside, otherwise we would go berserk in a porcelain shop with a big hammer.
Have a handkerchief, can travel.

Georg

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Waiting makes one appreciate the outcome more. "Time is too slow for those who wait..." but eventually it passes and the time to be together is there. Best regards for your resettlement, Rose.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

We were so lucky to have sold our house the first day it went on the market - Wow, I'll say. I've been trying to sell my home for two years now in this abysmal real estate market. You are extremely lucky, indeed!

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Very nice write sis, but it won't be long before you are back where you love and with the one you love darlin, so be patient

Love you sis,
Selena