One must always be careful not to get lured into the pitfalls of life. There is no better way to avoid falling than to become one's own person. The artificial attraction is for only those who have a problem with reality. Peace, Love and Strength to You Always, Paul
This is becoming a physical reality. Think about it, you drink water? You're taking in certain chemicals that someone has put there to satisfy his/her quallificating factors of "clean water." You eat? You're taking in someone's conception of nutrition or taste. Daily we injest other people's ideas. A purely self-produced thought is rare and refreshing. This poem is refreshing. Thank you. But my mind is starting to stick to it---gotta p-u-l-l* myself away! --Charlie
The innate freedom to roam free in such an illusive world, just wonderful....
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Jim Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
I like this.
would love to see your process,
how these thoughts traveled to paper
and found their way home.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
beautifully and irridescently transcended; i love the universe of themes [universal too] that run through your writes. .a stained glass mirror in which to view ourselves and the world. .. .
magic~
ness
I love the picture, is that you? Anyway it coincides so well with the freedom theme and imagery that you portray so well in this write. Very nice overall.
hugs
Fee
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
One must always be careful not to get lured into the pitfalls of life. There is no better way to avoid falling than to become one's own person. The artificial attraction is for only those who have a problem with reality. Peace, Love and Strength to You Always, Paul
"Fly Paper" abounds in poetic richness. It is a tour to the warehouse of knowledge with a must stop at the Minerva's Temple.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Be safe,
Karen
would love to see your process,
how these thoughts traveled to paper
and found their way home.
magic~
ness
hugs
Fee