Must not have been me. Never wore cologne. But I wouldn't violate a woman's senses with unwashed smells unless she liked them. I find men that wear cologne in the workplace repulsive. They are either hiding the fact they didn't shower or they are gay.
Otherwise, a great poem with a wonderful simile comparing the dawn with a lover slipping out.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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before you dare open that door. You could get the same treatment.
Or not.
Otherwise, a great poem with a wonderful simile comparing the dawn with a lover slipping out.
Ron
for this shore awesome presentation
most enjoyable
Peace be with you
Fee