I just emailed my best friend who has been hurt badly by her lover of 27 years and asked she read this. I hope it will help her...begin again. Beautiful, short and sweet. Very true. Glad I ran into your site.
In these feww words you have written a very deeply touching poem. This is an emotional read for me--thank you for steering me here.
Reviewed by Gina Bobina (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
The simplicity and conviction with which these few words are said, speak from a place only those who have had to start anew can understand. I know the next time I reach a dead end the lone words "Ab Initio" will come to mind.
Inspirational.
Thank you
-Also for the review of my poem and the helpful editing tips.
This resonates with my own beliefs. We are all here for a reason, to learn something, to help someone, to be better. Everything, good, bad, or indifferent is a teacher. Wonderful write.
Kathy
This is what I havre done with my life but it seems like when you forgive them they turn around and do the same thing over to you. Now I just keep my disatnce from the people that choose to afflict pain on my life.
Ab Initio--from the beginning. (I had to look it up, Richard.)
What wonderful positive thoughts you've written--well worth saving and reading again.
(Do you recall that song that goes something like: "Put all your troubles in an old knapsack and throw your cares away".) Your first statement definitely fits that concept.
Dr. Norman Vincent Peale wrote, in effect: "write all your woes on a piece of paper before you go to sleep, throw it in the trashcan and start each day fresh."
Great wisdob in such a small voice
but loud and clear
like Joselyn said "a beautiful truth"
Outstanding!!
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2007
Richard,
I could of swore I commented this poem. The wisdom and expressions here you give is forgiveness of a God Kind. When we are deemed tresspassed and wounded our souls have to take a special ounce of his GOD LOVE to be able to say and accomplish what you have written. A beautiful truth.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Inspirational.
Thank you
-Also for the review of my poem and the helpful editing tips.
Kathy
thank you
God Bless "you" -Spirit Warrior
Yes, I would concur...these words are beautiful Richard.
I think that is how we should live our lives...certainly feels much better.
Sincerely,
From the Heart...
Regis
Couldn't be wiser... "Begin Again, Ab Initio".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
What a beautiful piece about forgiveness and renewal. This is divine unconditional love--what courage, and what a true gift to oneself.
Love you!
Vicki
What wonderful positive thoughts you've written--well worth saving and reading again.
(Do you recall that song that goes something like: "Put all your troubles in an old knapsack and throw your cares away".) Your first statement definitely fits that concept.
Dr. Norman Vincent Peale wrote, in effect: "write all your woes on a piece of paper before you go to sleep, throw it in the trashcan and start each day fresh."
but loud and clear
like Joselyn said "a beautiful truth"
Outstanding!!
I could of swore I commented this poem. The wisdom and expressions here you give is forgiveness of a God Kind. When we are deemed tresspassed and wounded our souls have to take a special ounce of his GOD LOVE to be able to say and accomplish what you have written. A beautiful truth.
Blessings & Peace,
Joselyn
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Blessings,
Sharon
Sandie May Angel :o)